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meegbear Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-30-11 11:40 AM
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The Rude Pundit: A Poem for Memorial Day 2011
"So I Was a Coffin"

by Gerardo Mena

—For Corporal Kyle Powell, died in my arms, 04 November 2006

They said you are a spear. So I was a spear.

I walked around Iraq upright and tall, but the wind blew and I began to lean.
I leaned into a man, who leaned into a child, who leaned into a city. I walked
back to them and neatly presented a city of bodies packaged in rows.
They said no. You are a bad spear.

They said you are a flag. So I was a flag.

I climbed to the highest building, in the city that had no bodies, and I smiled
and waved as hard as I could. I waved too hard and I caught fire and I burned
down the city, but it had no bodies. They said no. You are a bad flag.

They said you are a bandage. So I was a bandage.

I jumped on Kyle's chest and wrapped my lace arms together around his torso and
pressed my head to his ribcage and listened to his heartbeat. Then I was full, so
I let go and wrung myself out.

And I jumped on Kyle's chest and wrapped my lace arms together around his torso
and pressed my head to his ribcage and listened to his heartbeat. Then I was full, so
I let go and wrung myself out.

And I jumped on Kyle's chest and wrapped my lace arms together around his torso
and pressed my head to his ribcage but there was no heartbeat. They said no. You
are a bad bandage.

They said you are a coffin. So I was.

I found a man. They said he died bravely, or he will. I encompassed him
in my finished wood, and I shut my lid around us. As they lowered us
into the ground he made no sound because he had no eyes
and could not cry. As I buried us in dirt we held our breaths together
and they said, yes. You are a good coffin.

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ocd liberal Donating Member (333 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-30-11 11:46 AM
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1. heartbreakingly wonderful - proud to be 1st rec
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-30-11 12:17 PM
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2. recommend
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flying rabbit Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-30-11 06:57 PM
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3. Rec
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Iwillnevergiveup Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-30-11 11:08 PM
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4. Good Rude
Thanks for posting.

K&R
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