A poem by my niece, worth any ten of my parodies

[SalmonChantedEvening]

Liars, cheaters
Besmirch the house
Once of honor, prestige
Now mocked the world over

They break the rules
Violate, desecrate
The most sacred of laws
And get away with it

One is known for turning
Predator into prey
The other for making
All grammar nazis cringe

Our reputation and standing
With the world has been
Completely destroyed
We no longer stand tall

On our pedestal of marble
It was chipped away at
Until it could no longer stand
And then down we tumbled

All because of one who
Started a war and is
Murdering the fathers
And mothers of the

Generation to come
And he does it all
In one name, for
The glory of one name

His own.
-------------
You-know-who, man.
Enjoy.
~Memmens
Revenge and avenge are the same thing; avenge just sounds nobler.

[malaise]

1. That's very good

Must be in the genes :D

[SalmonChantedEvening]

9. OH I hope not, for her sake

:rofl:

Hi malaise! thanks! she'll be back to read the thread later :)

:hi: :hug:

[malaise]

27. LOL

reminds me of my poetry in my youth :D

[patrice]

2. I enjoyed that!

:applause:

I hope she finds someone to put music with it.

[SalmonChantedEvening]

10. Thanks patrice!

If she wishes it :)

[patrice]

40. If she wishes it = ALWAYS a good place to consider anything with/for her.

Solidarity, SalmonEnchantedEvening!

[H2O Man]

3. Very good!

Nominated.

Thank you!

[SalmonChantedEvening]

11. A pleasure sir

As always :hi: :pals: :loveya:

[WillyT]

4. That Was Fantastic !!! - Thanks For Sharing !!! - K & R !!!

Tell your niece...

:yourock:

:hi:

[SalmonChantedEvening]

14. Hi WillyT! Done and done :)

Good to see ya Holmes :)

:hi: :pals: :loveya:

[Glenda]

5. Wow! Cool!

Tell her that's very awesome! :)

:hi:

[SalmonChantedEvening]

16. Hi Glenda! Thank you so much

I'm just gonna grin at her as she reads these :)

:hi: :loveya: :hug:

[annabanana]

6. Quite good. Thanks for posting it!. . . . . n/t

[SalmonChantedEvening]

17. Yes'm annaB :)

:hi: :hug:

[OPERATIONMINDCRIME]

7. Great Piece. How Old Is Your Niece?

[SalmonChantedEvening]

8. Hi OMC and thank you.

She'll be 16 next month.

:hi: :hug:

[OPERATIONMINDCRIME]

12. Definitely Impressive For 16.

[SeattleGirl]

13. Well done!

:applause:

[SalmonChantedEvening]

18. Thank you SeattleGirl!

I'm knocked out by this piece, she's leaps and bounds better everytime I read something new she's written :D

[smokey nj]

15. Your niece is very talented, SCE!!!

[SalmonChantedEvening]

19. hi smokey, she surely is!

I can't wait for her to read this thread, it's gonna make her day/week/I'll let her decide :)

[ralps]

20. Very Cool SalmonChantedEvening! I hope she posts more of her poems here!

:hi: :loveya: :hug: :pals: :woohoo: :applause:

[SalmonChantedEvening]

21. Thank you ralps! Gonna try and talk her into

Her own DU membership :)

:hi: :hug: :loveya:

[lala_rawraw]

22. kick-

a-doodle-do

[SalmonChantedEvening]

23. thank

a you-ha-hoo :D

:hug: :loveya:

[tnlefty]

24. Very well done!

You have some competition! :evilgrin:

[SalmonChantedEvening]

25. hi tnlefty!! she's a real special young lady

Competition with her might be my undoing :rofl:

:hi: :pals: :loveya:

[Swamp Rat]

26. a LOT of smilies...

:D

:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:

:yourock:

[SalmonChantedEvening]

32. Your Swampness!

Thank you my friend! :D

:hi: :hug: :pals:

[11 Bravo]

28. Damn! Genius appears to run in the family!

Those are the words of a remarkably talented and incisive young woman. You should be proud.

[Viva_La_Revolution]

29. I agree!

:applause:

[SalmonChantedEvening]

34. I'm just glad she didn't get my looks

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Hi Viva hun! Thank you :)

:hug: :loveya:

[SalmonChantedEvening]

33. I am that 11 Bravo

She's an amazing young woman :)

She writes sci-fi as well.

:hi: :pals:

[cal04]

30. WOW SalmonChantedEvening

your niece is very talented
Very well done!!!
thanks for posting
:hi:

[SalmonChantedEvening]

35. hi cal04! Thank You!

She's gonna burst when she reads this thread :D:D:D

:hi: :hug: :loveya:

[BleedingHeartPatriot]

31. A stunning brilliant light. K & R

:kick:

MKJ

[SalmonChantedEvening]

37. Thank you BHP, she has a great mind

And a kind soul to go with it.

I am so very proud of her. :loveya:

[BigBearJohn]

36. Ahhhhh.... Genius runs in the family, I see! K/R

[SalmonChantedEvening]

38. Thank you BBJ!!

Let's hope insanity doesn't :rofl:

Much obliged sir, this will surely leave her speechless :hi: :pals: :hug: :loveya: :)

[Sydnie]

39. So much truth to speak about

for a young girl!

Tell her - a big comes from me to her!

[SalmonChantedEvening]

41. Sydnie! So sweet of you :)

I'll send her your gracious words :)

:hi: :hug: :loveya: