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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-12-06 10:58 PM
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I taste the sand
Edited on Tue Sep-12-06 11:15 PM by Tom Yossarian Joad


I taste the sand
and feel the grit

it's in my teeth
it's in my shit

I see the bodies
pilin' high

and count the minutes
'till I die

I signed on
for green and hope

to pay the car off
and buy some dope

I signed on
at seventeen

Fresh from school
and real green

Never killed a man
or child or mom

Never saw what's left
after a bomb.

I live in armor
and tents and cots

and then the sounds
of final shots

and wonder why
it ends so soon

and think it's not
like in that 'toon

I ain't a hero
just a man

dyin' slow
and seein' my hand

some ten feet away
still graspin' at air

and screaming to god
it really ain't fair.
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Luna_Chick Donating Member (287 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-12-06 11:07 PM
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1. A virtual hug for you, Dear Tom
Edited on Tue Sep-12-06 11:12 PM by Luna_Chick
And peace. :hug:

Edited to add: When I read this, the vision of Henry Raleigh's "Blood or Bread" came to mind. My aunt has long had it hanging in her home and I have always been fascinated by it.

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Webster Green Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-12-06 11:08 PM
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2. That was awesome!.....Put it back now!
Fucking heavy!
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-12-06 11:09 PM
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4. Thanks... Back up.
Edited on Tue Sep-12-06 11:16 PM by Tom Yossarian Joad
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MoseyWalker Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-12-06 11:09 PM
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3. I missed it, but don't want to
?
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-12-06 11:14 PM
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5. It's back up. Thanks.
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MoseyWalker Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-12-06 11:26 PM
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7. that is pretty damn good!
thanks again
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Change has come Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-12-06 11:25 PM
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6. Error: You've already recommended that thread.
FUCK

:cry:
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