I learned some things tonight

[MoseyWalker]

I don't have any anger at my pseudo friends, they are friends after all

There is no such thing as a "war on terror"

I have shrunk a bit since high school

A dead body is still a dead body

I wish I had more confidence

Grandma doesn't like it when you bomb her house and kill her family

I am so attracted to a woman and I didn't think I would be, I think she likes me

Blood running in the streets does not make for an acceptable photo

If I fall in love and ask her, will she say yes?

When will the bombs stop???? When can we go home?????

How many children does she want? As many as me? How many will we have?

Why am I carrying my child out of a burnt out building - dead

What will happen tomorrow?

I am so concerned

should I ask her to marry me?

Will I have to bury my family?

[Tom Yossarian Joad]

1. Damn, boyo. You got me at hello! Well done K&R

[MoseyWalker]

2. thanks buddy!

I can touch it up, but it's already out there.

thanks again for reading

[Tom Yossarian Joad]

3. You still have time to edit if you feel it needs it...

I wasn't doing a critical read, but sure liked the juxtaposition of emotions you portrayed.

You always take a chance putting up creative writing on a message board like this, but it's great to see the feedback and reaction. It's seldom what you expect.

Kinda like this last one I put up. I'm still a bit nervous about it. http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=view_all&address=364x1794093

[MoseyWalker]

4. thanks!

you link won't allow me to go anywhere?

[Tom Yossarian Joad]

5. Try it now....

[MoseyWalker]

6. I need some recommendations here friends

I have written and written and written

This deserves someone to see it, I think.

[Bluebear]

7. My great pleasure. nt

[MoseyWalker]

8. Thank you

I hate to beg, and hope it didn't come across that way.

Thanks again

[Tom Yossarian Joad]

9. Hey, if you think you have something good, go for it!

I think you do here.

I would like to see more people stretch their creative legs here in this sort of format.

[MoseyWalker]

10. I would be willing to bet

that there are many with creative legs!

for some reason, people just don't express themselves.

[Tom Yossarian Joad]

11. It takes either guts or stupidity to throw your version of art out there

in a general public forum where people can anonymously give their opinion of your worth as a communicator. Many (more sane than I) chose to behave in a normal fashion. You can view my Journal for a sampling of some of the things I've thrown out here.

There are a lot of readers here who enjoy efforts in the vein you mine tonight.

[guinivere]

17. Of course.

I liked it.




Thanks for posting your poem.

[Sydnie]

12. Happily kicking it to the Greatest Page

Well done.

[MoseyWalker]

13. Thanks Sydnie

I'm always shocked when anyone notices.

please read the thread, and see the poetic options that are there..

More to come later.

[MoseyWalker]

14. Doesn't anybody love me anymore?

ba dump. ba doo bee doo bee doo.

kick for old brains sake

[Tom Yossarian Joad]

15. Patience, Grasshopper.

LOL

[cool user name]

16. Kicking and recommending.

Great post.

Thanks for sharing.

[karlrschneider]

18. Nicely done.

:kick:

[MoseyWalker]

19. Read and recommend

it's that simple!

I'll write some more, but I need inspiration, dammit!


:toast:

[Synnical]

20. Nice - I learned some things too!

Here are mine

Atheists and homosexuals are forming a shadow government
http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=show_mesg&forum=263&topic_id=20290&mesg_id=20290

Playing the Atheism Card Against Pat Tillman’s Family

http://www.truthdig.com/report/item/20060728_worm_dirt/

[NanceGreggs]

21. There is no praise great enough ...

... for those who can capture the hope/despair, anticipation/dread, love/hate that is life, inextricably intertwined in a few well-chosen words.

Beautifully written. Honestly stated.

And thankfully, shared.

[cynatnite]

22. Damn!

Talk about powerful.

Excellent!