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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-28-05 04:53 PM
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scorekeeper
funny
how the sun plays
tag with the moon
and keeps the score
by the
lines on my face
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pinerow Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-31-05 10:08 AM
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1. Nice...!!
nt
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jul-12-06 04:32 PM
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3. glad you liked it.
:hi:
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samsingh Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jul-12-06 03:49 PM
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2. excellent piece
the last line is powerful and in contrast to the way the piece begins. Excellent.
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jul-12-06 04:32 PM
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4. thanks, for your kind comments.
:hi:
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samsingh Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-13-06 09:16 AM
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5. have you posted more stuff like this ?
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-13-06 10:49 AM
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6. I think I hid all the other threads....I was new here and shy and a
little bit scared:scared::blush:
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ncrainbowgrrl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Aug-16-06 10:19 PM
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7. Great short compact wordplay.
With so few words you've described life itself- and our collective relationship to the larger world around us.
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 07:40 PM
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8. thanks for the kind comments...
I had forgotten I had posted this
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