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WillParkinson (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-14-08 09:27 PM Original message |
Great at spelling, suck at punctuation...help me with this quote: |
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eyesroll (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-14-08 09:31 PM Response to Original message |
1. You're good. |
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gristy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-14-08 09:31 PM Response to Original message |
2. looks good to me |
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WannaJumpMyScooter (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-14-08 09:32 PM Response to Original message |
3. I think you have it |
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msongs (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-14-08 09:32 PM Response to Original message |
4. try saying "and" instead of "but" nt |
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leftyclimber (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-14-08 09:35 PM Response to Reply #4 |
7. Second vote for "and". |
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But.... (656 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-14-08 10:04 PM Response to Reply #7 |
10. Definitely... |
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jimshoes (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-14-08 09:32 PM Response to Original message |
5. I think you've got it. |
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WannaJumpMyScooter (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-14-08 09:33 PM Response to Original message |
6. Or you could say |
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Sal Minella (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-14-08 09:40 PM Response to Original message |
8. The punctuation is good as it stands, but rewriting is possible: |
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bluedawg12 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-14-08 09:44 PM Response to Original message |
9. How about? |
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VPStoltz (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-15-08 12:24 AM Response to Original message |
11. You might consider a - before the last clause. |
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