Obama Commercial for response to the Celebrity ads...what it should be

[AllentownJake]

Obama in a study looking straight into the Camera.

I'm Barack Obama and I approve this message. My opponent seems to want to talk alot about my popularity and wants to brand me as some sort of new celebrity on the scene. I want to point out something to my opponent. In the democratic primary large crowds gathered for both myself and Senator Clinton. I don't think its because either of us are movie stars but I believe people came to here our democratic ideas and we were offering change to the rhetoric that has been coming from the Republican party for the past 8 years. Maybe the reason Senator and Clinton and I are so popular are our ideas for the future (list of areas that need improvement) and if Senator McCain offered real change he'd draw more people to his events to hear his message not the same things that George W Bush has been saying for the past 8 years. Thank you.

[BklynChick]

1. I like that.

[KittyWampus]

2. Your version has too many words and doesn't really counter attack

[AllentownJake]

3. I added a counter attack

Compare him to Bush at the end and I'm not a writer. People come to see democrats because they like what we have to offer not because we are celebrities should be the point. People don't come to see you because we've heard the same BS for the past 8 years.

[blogslut]

4. I like the only they already made

http://link.brightcove.com/services/link/bcpid1185304443/bctid1721792723

[cbc5g]

5. That's weak in so many ways

If America was made up of liberal intellectuals, that would work.... but it isn't. That message continues the meme instead of turning it around on the other guy.

[depakid]

6. No opportunity for the Bush imagery there...

You gotta admit, weaving the THE HUG scene was great. Been waiting for that....