Poem.... Tomorrow always comes

[Rising Phoenix]

I was looking for one on loss but found this

This is for every girl
who fucked me then
never called back
(you know who you are)

This for every time you
said I was too sick

And every time you said I
had to toughen up, you can't be that sick
WTF

This is for every time you told me
to get a slave to do that

And then got mad at me for having
foot slaves ( you know who you are)

This is for every time you sat on the porch
drinking vodka while I lay in our three person bed

That never comfortably fit more than two
( bastards you are)

[Shell Beau]

1. Well. I certainly know who you are talking about it this poem.

I hope you can find your other poems, and I hope you are doing well.

[Rising Phoenix]

2. I was talking about several people

not just who you think

good night

[Shell Beau]

3. I don't doubt you. I do remember you saying you wish your past

could be that. I hope it is, and I wish you the best with anything that comes your way. I know poetry is about your life and experiences at the time, but I will say I so thought of them when I saw this. Maybe I was supposed to, I don't know. Anyway, good night. Best of dreams. :)

[Rising Phoenix]

4. it was about 4 or 5 people in my life

my past is my past, and this poem was written years ago, I don't think there is anything wrong with posting a poem I wrote years ago as part of my art......I"m not calling anyone out, not asking for a specific response,

poetry is supposed to represent your life, past present and future. I feel no resentment, it is just a years old poem......nothing more, nothing less. good night

[XemaSab]

5. I actually think this poem is decent because it is honest

but are you treating it honestly yourself? :shrug:

[Rising Phoenix]

6. maybe not

the poem is about several relationships i've had

but yes, the longest was about who everyone think.....


I have moved on, but when I wrote the poem I was angry, at them, at her (someone else) and at him ( someone else)


it is honest.....step on me and I will make you a poem

[XemaSab]

7. Ok

As long as you're straight with yourself. :pals:

[cwydro]

8. Kicking

for your poem.