Poem....first draft...stream of consciousness

[Rising Phoenix]

Props to Shakira for the first line

HONEY

All the things that I deserve for being such a good girl... honey

pain
self hate
high
low
fat
skinny
sick
sick
sick
sick
funny
scared
scared
housebound
wanderlust
contradictions
great sex
really bad sex
a heart that will never
really break
wait
is that a good thing?
or a bad thing?
a lost baby
art
vision
sixth sense
magic
heart
soul
friends
lonliness
loss
hope
- lessness
a really comfortable bed to rest my head after a day
filled with this
....honey

[CaliforniaPeggy]

1. My dear Rising Phoenix!

Ah, poetry night in the Lounge!

This is very cool, and I applaud you.

Thanks for sharing it, sweetie...

:hug:

[Rising Phoenix]

2. thanks I was scared

but I'm sharing

you, my muse


any suggestions lounge