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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 11:34 AM
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A poem thread Saturday 6/20/09
The Hotel Devotion

by Sandra Beasley



In the Hotel Devotion
there is no running water,

no power, no stairs,
no bed. There is only

the woman who holds
a river in her mouth,

fireflies in her hands,
the woman who bends

for you, opens for you.
There is only this book,

this pen in your hand,
your name the only name.

Outside, pigeons bellying
down the alleys of night.

Inside, this sadness
blooming in your throat.

Sometimes a handful of
light is mistaken for love. I

did not know it was a river
until I tried to swallow.





:hi:
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fight4my3sons Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 12:19 PM
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1. Thank you
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 12:21 PM
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2. Thanks for reading
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Fleshdancer Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 12:45 PM
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3. kick!
very nice. Thanks for posting!
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Lyric Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 01:02 PM
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4. kick
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Tektonik Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 01:02 PM
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5. Thanks
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abq e streeter Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 01:13 PM
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6. Wow--that's really good
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 01:23 PM
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7. My dear miss_american_pie!
What a wonderful poem...

And thank you for filling the gap...

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Sky Masterson Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 01:50 PM
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8. Nice (Isn't she your girl crush) ;)
:hi: :kick:
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FloridaJudy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 02:01 PM
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9. Nice!
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bigwillq Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 03:37 PM
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10. Kick
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 06:52 PM
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11. Hey!!
I love this one. Thanks for saving me from poem-thread withdrawal. :hi:
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tigereye Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 07:45 PM
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12. very nice! Carrying on the tradition!


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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 09:13 PM
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13. Thank you for posting this.
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-20-09 09:15 PM
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14. Yay!
:applause:

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