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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-01-09 06:43 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Wed 5/1/2009)
Meeting on the Turret Stairs

“Lie down beside me,” I whispered.
So we lay on the bed
in that room that was the whole world to us.
Outside, the innkeeper’s children
kicked a soccer ball along the quay.
Seagulls flocked and dispersed,
and the busy foolish world went about its foolish business.

I shut my eyes and
we met on turret stairs.
I felt the braid of your hair
brush my cheek like a glance.
In the distance someone was blowing a horn.
Voices, and boots hurrying across the boards overhead
as the tower awoke by torchlight.
I had drawn my sword.

I opened my eyes then and saw
you watching me from the pillow,
your agate eyes two demi-lunettes.
Horses neighed in the place I was coming out of,
and stamped their iron-shod hooves
on the stones of the stable yard below,
striking sparks like the flinty stars.
A banner snapped in the sharp breeze
as dawn blazed through.
I could smell a river close-by,
your body opening to my hands.

Richard Tillinghast

************

:hi:

RL
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Sky Masterson Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-01-09 06:57 AM
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1. I need a cigarette
And I don't even smoke.:P
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-01-09 05:56 PM
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4. ...
:hi:

RL
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-01-09 07:01 AM
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2. I need a whole pack of cigarettes.
Because I'm about to start smoking.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-01-09 05:56 PM
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5. ...
:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-01-09 11:17 AM
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3. My dear Retro...
Ah, wow...

So very beautiful, such great imagery, wonderful...

To have a love like that...

Few are lucky that way, and even fewer can express it so tenderly, so vividly.

Thank you...

:cry:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-01-09 05:56 PM
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6. ...
:hi:

RL
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