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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 01:52 AM
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"The Sacred Dark"
You lean over me
In the sacred dark
Your hands move over me
My head tilts
And I feel your kiss,
Your touch

Your tenderness
Lifts my spirit
It says
I matter
In this upside down
World

You hold my face
Still with your mouth
And I gasp for breath
As you touch

You
Reach me
I join you
In your passion
My body rises to
Meet you

We join at the core
In the sacred dark
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NYC_SKP Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:02 AM
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1. My dear California Peggy!
Those words are beautiful!

I'm bookmarking for future re-reading, and possible use in wooing....

:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:07 AM
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5. My dear NYC_SKP!
Oh my goodness...

Thank you so much!

Feel free to do any honest wooing with these...



:hug:
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DarkTirade Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:03 AM
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2. Oh my...
... is it warm in here, or is it just me?
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:08 AM
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7. My dear DarkTirade...
You have me there...

Glad you enjoyed my little work, sweetie...

:hug:
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mcctatas Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:04 AM
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3. Holy Hell!
that is amazing and beautiful and kinda makes me feel like I need a cold shower. You are very talented Peggy!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:09 AM
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8. My dear mcctatas!
Wow, thank you!

I am amazed that my little poem can make you feel all those splendid ways...

:hug:
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FloridaJudy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:04 AM
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I'll be in my bunk...
Very well done, CP.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:11 AM
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10. My dear FloridaJudy!
Make sure you have someone you love there too...

Thank you, sweetie...

It means a lot!

:hug:
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Sultana Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:04 AM
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4. Wonderful poem
:)
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:10 AM
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9. My dear SillyFlower!
I am so happy you enjoyed this!

Thank you...

:hug:
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PaddyBlueEyes Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:07 AM
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6. Wow
way to go Pegs! :yourock:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:13 AM
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11. My dear PaddyBlueEyes!
I doubt that you and mcctatas need any inspiration, but if you do, feel free to recite this to each other...

Thank you, sweetie...

I am honored by your praise...

:hug:
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SalmonChantedEvening Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 06:52 AM
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12. Very well done Peggy!!
And when I say wow, I mean wow. ;)

:hi: :loveya: :applause:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 10:59 AM
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16. My dear SalmonChantedEvening!
Oh, thank you, sweetie...

So glad you like my little work!

:hug: :loveya:
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Callalily Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 07:07 AM
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13. Wow!
I really like this one Peggy!

Your tenderness
Lifts my spirit
It says
I matter
In this upside down
World
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 11:01 AM
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17. My dear Simply Fugue!
Wow, thanks...

This particular stanza gave me some trouble...

I wasn't at all sure I liked it...

I'm glad you do!

:hug:
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Mad_Dem_X Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 09:08 AM
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14. Wow!
Hot stuff!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 11:02 AM
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18. My dear Mad_Dem_X!
Glad you think so!

Thank you...

:hug:
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grannylib Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 09:20 AM
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15. Oh Peggy...that is so beautiful! Wow...I am in awe.
Beautiful!
:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 11:04 AM
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19. My dear grannylib!
Thank you so much...it means a lot.

I am very lucky to have such love in my life...

:hug:
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 11:14 AM
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20. Very nice
My favorite lines:

You hold my face
Still with your mouth
And I gasp for breath

:-)
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 11:19 AM
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21. My dear KC2!
Thanks, sweetie!

I like those as well...

Let's just say they're very descriptive...;-)
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crimsonblue Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 02:53 PM
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22. great poem...
i can only imagine that Mr. CaliforniaPeggy is the inspiration for this one. :P
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-07-09 03:35 PM
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23. My dear crimsonblue!
Indeed he is...

How'd you guess?

I am so very lucky!

Thank you...

:hug:
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