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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 06:45 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Thu 4/3/2008)
Writing

The cursive crawl, the squared-off characters
these by themselves delight, even without
a meaning, in a foreign language, in
Chinese, for instance, or when skaters curve
all day across the lake, scoring their white
records on ice. Being intelligible,
these winding ways with their audacities
and delicate hesitations, they become
miraculous, so intimately, out there
at the pen's point or brush's tip, do world
and spirit wed. The small bones of the wrist
balance against great skeletons of stars
exactly; the blind bat surveys his way
by echo alone. Still, the point of style
is character. The universe induces
a different tremor in every hand, from the
check-forger's to that of the Emperor
Hui Tsung, who called his own calligraphy
the 'Slender Gold.' A nervous man
Writes nervously of a nervous world, and so on.

Miraculous. It is as though the world
were a great writing. Having said so much,
let us allow there is more to the world
than writing: continental faults are not
bare convoluted fissures in the brain.
Not only must the skaters soon go home;
also the hard inscription of their skates
is scored across the open water, which long
remembers nothing, neither wind nor wake.

Howard Nemerov

******************************

:hi:

RL
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YankeyMCC Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 07:09 AM
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1. Very nice
"The universe induces
a different tremor in every hand, from the
check-forger's to that of the Emperor
Hui Tsung, who called his own calligraphy
the 'Slender Gold.'"

Or does the universe respond to the tremors of the writer's hands? ;)

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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 07:28 AM
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2. Neat
the blind bat surveys his way
by echo alone. Still, the point of style
is character.


:thumbsup:
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 07:28 AM
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3. ...
The small bones of the wrist
balance against great skeletons of stars
exactly; the blind bat surveys his way
by echo alone.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 10:40 AM
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4. Niiiiiice.
:-)
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 10:46 AM
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5. My dear Retro...
Wonderful...

...Not only must the skaters soon go home;
also the hard inscription of their skates
is scored across the open water, which long
remembers nothing, neither wind nor wake.


Just lovely...

There is so much creativity here, between your threads and BlueIris'...

Some days I can hardly stand it...

It is both intimidating and inspiring!

Thank you...

:hi:
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