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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 07:35 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sat 1/12/2008)
The Matter

          Some men break your heart in two...
          --Dorothy Parker, "Experience"


Some men carry you to bed with your boots on.
Some men say your name like a verbal tic.
Some men slap on an emotional surcharge for every erotic encounter.
Some men are slightly mentally ill, and thinking of joining a gym.
Some men have moved on and can't be seduced, even in the dream bars you meet them in.
Some men who were younger are now the age you were then.
Some men aren't content with mere breakage, they've got to burn you to the ground.
Some men you've reduced to ashes are finally dusting themselves off.
Some men are made of fiberglass.
Some men have deep holes drilled in by a war, you can't fill them.
Some men are delicate and torn.
Some men will steal your bracelet if you let them spend the night.
Some men will want to fuck your poems, and instead they will find you.
Some men will say, "I'd like to see how you look when you come," and then hail a cab.
Some men are a list of ingredients with no recipe.
Some men never see you.
Some men will blindfold you during sex, then secretly put on high heels.
Some men will try on your black fishnet stockings in a hotel in Rome, or Saran Wrap you
      to a bedpost in New Orleans.
Some of these men will be worth trying to keep.
Some men will write smugly condescending reviews of your work, making you remember
      these lines by Frank O'Hara:
I cannot possibly think of you/other than you are: the assassin/ of my orchards.
Some men, let's face it, really are too small.
Some men are too large, but it's not usually a deal breaker.
Some men don't have one at all.
Some men will slap you in a way you'll like.
Some men will want to crawl inside you to die.
Some men never clean up the matter.
Some men hand you their hearts like leaflets,
and some men's hearts seem to circle forever: you catch sight of them on clear nights,
bright dots among the stars, and wait for their orbits to decay, for them to fall to earth.

Kim Addonizio

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Kim Addonizio is the author of three books of poetry from BOA Editions: The Philosopher's Club, Jimmy & Rita, and Tell Me, which was a finalist for the 2000 National Book Award. Her latest collection, What Is This Thing Called Love, was published by W.W. Norton in January 2004. A book of stories, In the Box Called Pleasure, was published by Fiction Collective 2. She is also co-author, with Dorianne Laux, of The Poet's Companion: A Guide to the Pleasures of Writing Poetry (W.W. Norton). With Cheryl Dumesnil she co-edited Dorothy Parker's Elbow: Tattoos on Writers, Writers on Tattoos (Warner Books).

Her first novel, Little Beauties, was published by Simon & Schuster in August 2005 and came out in paperback inJuly 06. Her new novel, My Dreams Out in the Street, has just been published by Simon & Schuster (July 07).

She also has a word/music CD with poet Susan Browne, "Swearing, Smoking, Drinking, & Kissing," available from cdbaby.

Her awards include two fellowships from the National Endowment for the Arts, a Guggenheim Fellowship,a Pushcart Prize, a Commonwealth Club Poetry Medal, and the John Ciardi Lifetime Achievement Award.

Her poetry and fiction have appeared widely in anthologies and literary journals including Alaska Quarterly Review, American Poetry Review, Chick-Lit, Dick for a Day, Gettysburg Review, Paris Review, Penthouse, Poetry, and Threepenny Review. She teaches private workshops in Oakland, CA.



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:hi:

RL
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Rising Phoenix Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 07:44 AM
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1. I like
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 08:41 AM
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2. oh.yeah.
...and some men's hearts seem to circle forever: you catch sight of them on clear nights,
bright dots among the stars, and wait for their orbits to decay, for them to fall to earth."

I think that is what I am waiting for....

:donut:

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 09:58 AM
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3. ...
:hi:

RL
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 10:04 AM
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4. "Some men are made of fiberglass."
So true.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 08:55 PM
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15. ...
:hi:

RL
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 12:06 PM
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5. Me likey
:thumbsup:
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Gonzo Gardener Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 12:42 PM
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6. Some men will post fantastic poetry...
when all you wanted was a kind word and a cup of strong coffee. :hangover:

:thumbsup:

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 12:43 PM
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7. I can deliver those too...
:hi:

RL
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SallyMander Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 12:44 PM
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8. ...

:hug:

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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 12:47 PM
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9. Oooh, that looks good!
:hi:

RL
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SallyMander Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 12:50 PM
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10. I know, i like the mug too!

Hope you're having a nice weekend RL! :hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 01:06 PM
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11. Having a good one so far...
Went to a book sale and bought a bunch of new books for the store.

How's is going by you?

:hi:

RL
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SallyMander Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 01:17 PM
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13. So far so good!

I need to get some work done, but so far i've just been listening to NPR and procrastinating on DU. ;)

I think we're going out with some friends tonight, playing a bit of matchmaker with a single guy and gal... we'll see how it goes! :evilgrin:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 01:13 PM
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12. My dear Retro...
There's a lot of truth in this one....

A lot of truth!

I really like this...

Quite stunning, and I thank you, as always...

:hug:
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XemaSab Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 01:24 PM
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14. I likee....
:D
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 09:07 PM
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16. god i love men.
i'm suddenly hungry for a big ol steak --
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 01:02 AM
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18. Rare?
:shrug:

RL
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 02:40 AM
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19. medium rare -- cause i like a little heat with my meat.
:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 10:05 AM
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20. Oh, you are a bad bad boy...
:spank:

RL
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 01:15 PM
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21. damn! -- i love it when a guy
gets me. -- :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 01:58 PM
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22. Get Gotten - Ben Lee
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kMvMKASSq00

ok, baby
what'll it be?
i asked my friends, and they all agreed
you're exactly the kind of trouble that i need
i got songs to give
i got songs to prove
songs i use when i wanna' seduce, and i wanna' seduce you
why won't you let me?

i wanna' get you
so get gotten
i won't stop til' i get to the bottom
i wanna' get you
so get gotten

i got big, big dreams
in a small, small world
and i'm using god to pick up girls
and i'm willing to put it all on the line

i got words that destroy
words that build
i use words and feel no guilt about it
i got words that go bump in the night

it's no secret that i've fallen
i won't stop til' i get to the bottom
it's no secret that i've fallen

'cause first you're ripe
and then you're rotten
don't stop 'til you get to the bottom
first you're ripe
and then rotten

once I knew
but i've forgotten
i find out when i get to the bottom
once I knew
but i've forgotten

i wanna' get you
so get gotten
i won't stop 'til I get to the bottom
i wanna' get you
so get gotten


:hi:

RL
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 02:07 PM
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23. well -- i'm no girl -- but you will find me
on the bottom -- ;-)

and thanks for that -- btw -- that was great.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-13-08 02:38 PM
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24. ...
:blush:

:rofl:

:hi:

RL
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-12-08 10:09 PM
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17. Some men...
geesh!

I really enjoyed this one Retro.

:thumbsup:
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