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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Nov-01-07 06:58 PM Original message |
Two New Poems for your amusement / enjoyment / pain (poems added) |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Nov-01-07 07:36 PM Response to Original message |
1. The Flood |
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hisownpetard (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Nov-01-07 09:12 PM Response to Reply #1 |
6. Excellent sounds (as evidenced in the first line, welcome/swelter, summer/flood, |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-02-07 10:21 PM Response to Reply #6 |
20. "almost like a line from Blake" |
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hisownpetard (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-03-07 12:26 AM Response to Reply #20 |
22. Yeah, it's a wonderful line. The way you 'toggle' between the s sounds and the l sounds, |
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lizziegrace (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-02-07 07:28 PM Response to Reply #1 |
16. This poem reminds me of Neil Young's lyrics and imagery |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Nov-01-07 07:39 PM Response to Original message |
2. Outside Fountain City, Wisconsin |
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hisownpetard (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Nov-01-07 08:57 PM Response to Reply #2 |
5. A villanelle!! I've never written a decent one, ever, so mega congrats to you, Sir. |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Nov-01-07 11:11 PM Response to Reply #5 |
7. Thank you |
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hisownpetard (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Nov-01-07 11:15 PM Response to Reply #7 |
8. I can't get over that you just dashed off a vilanelle, one of the hardest forms |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Nov-01-07 11:21 PM Response to Reply #8 |
9. I wish I had written this last week... |
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hisownpetard (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Nov-01-07 11:40 PM Response to Reply #9 |
10. There'll be lots of dealines, don't worry about that. Most important part is |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-02-07 07:02 AM Response to Reply #10 |
11. LOL! |
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lizziegrace (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Nov-01-07 07:40 PM Response to Original message |
3. I'm glad you posted these |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Thu Nov-01-07 07:42 PM Response to Reply #3 |
4. You're most welcome |
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lizziegrace (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-02-07 07:16 PM Response to Reply #4 |
15. So what else ya got?? |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-02-07 07:32 PM Response to Reply #15 |
17. Oh, I got lots... |
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lizziegrace (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-02-07 07:33 PM Response to Reply #17 |
18. Oh... |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-02-07 07:45 PM Response to Reply #18 |
19. Nice Lyrics... |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-02-07 12:13 PM Response to Original message |
12. kick |
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lizziegrace (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-02-07 12:16 PM Response to Reply #12 |
13. Hey! |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-02-07 12:19 PM Response to Reply #13 |
14. Hey Yourself! |
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BlueIris (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-02-07 10:26 PM Response to Original message |
21. READ RETRO'S BRILLIANT POEMS, LOUNGERS. |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-03-07 04:13 PM Response to Reply #21 |
25. Poetry as a contact sport! |
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BlueIris (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-03-07 01:07 AM Response to Original message |
23. I TOLD YOU to READ THEM!!! |
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RetroLounge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-03-07 11:19 AM Response to Reply #23 |
24. Thanks |
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