My poem the confusing mystification:

[Neoma]

Perversed a faith of decency by drunkenness atrocity.
Prisoners of oblectation, in behavioral condonation.
Sink in rancorous caustic motionless under burning mirth.
Pivotal, critical, vital influential, in your importance crossed at birth.
Curved a scimitar transversely out of my exposed naked teeth.
Seduced cry of gravity, vividly aside of me, a zeal wrath increased.

[wildhorses]

1. i like it --

its a mouthful alright;)

[Neoma]

2. Yeah.

The more you read it the more it makes sense I guess.

[wildhorses]

4. may i ask a question?

i would just like to edit one little word...

[Neoma]

5. Oh?

[wildhorses]

8. i just think

zealous for zeal

that is all

and it is just my way of reading it out loud...

no biggie

i truly like it

you can tell me to STFU anytime now

:yoiks:

[Neoma]

9. Hmm, that works.

[Neoma]

10. Not sure I'll do that though.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

3. My dear Neoma!

I like the way the words roll off my tongue...

But you're right...I don't know the meanings of half of them...

I do like the rhythm of it, though...

Keep working! And writing!

I'll post mine later...got to make dinner now...

:hi:

[wildhorses]

6. she did it calpeg !!

i am SOo0o0 proud of her...it takes guts and courage to show the world your baby

[Neoma]

11. Not so much.

I've shared other poems.

[Neoma]

7. Dictionary.com is handy.

[Chan790]

12. Nice...

That's quite a vocabulary. It has a frenetic quality to it which suits the word choices.

[Neoma]

13. Thanks.

[Neoma]

14. Kick.