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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-05-07 08:41 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 2/5/2007)
Anniversary

That you and I, I and you,
this twenty-fifth year after
you stamped your foot, shattered
the glass, and friends, so many dead
or forgotten, applauded in a ballroom
long abandoned, twenty-five years
of Monday good-byes, monthly wars
with stacks of bills, bags of garbage,
frozen gutters, nights filled
with pink medicines, fevered cheeks
on shoulders, the other hand reaching
for the pediatrician's call, termites
chewing, and hours waiting
for the door to open, holding
our own daughter's head vomiting
beer into our own leaking toilet,
that now, as mirrors mark the descent
of breasts, the tub catches silvered
pubic hair and our eyes wear pouches
and hoods, as though expecting rain,
that you and I could smell the salt
of each other, coming together after
long absence, silent, still, staring up
at the darkening ceiling, naked in a house
with empty, orderly bedrooms, the last
of dead roses and discarded boyfriends
tossed out, your hand touching mine,
our breathing slowing,
the wonder of it all.

Davi Walders

***************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul


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Droopy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-05-07 08:57 AM
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1. That's a beautiful poem
I used to write poetry, but it was horrible :).
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ganeshji Donating Member (401 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-05-07 10:52 AM
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2. Nice.
May we all get there someday...
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-05-07 12:24 PM
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3. Good morning, my dear Retro......
Ah, this is nice.......

Remembering a marriage that still goes forward.......

And all the little details, both physical and mental, that make it work...

Just beautiful in its ordinaryness........

Thank you.....:hug:
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-05-07 05:46 PM
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4. God, how lovely.
RetroLounge, if I didn't thank you for doing the Daily Poetry Thread... thank you! :hi:
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KitchenWitch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-05-07 06:28 PM
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5. Whoa spooky!
Today is the twenty year anniversary of my cancer diagnosis.

I am still alive!

:)
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idgiehkt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-05-07 06:30 PM
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6. very, very nice
wow. Makes me wanna get married.
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-05-07 10:31 PM
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7. the wonder of it all--
very nice
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WritingIsMyReligion Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-05-07 10:34 PM
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8. Gee, that makes a body wanna go leap straight into a pool and ne'er come out.
Pool of love that is.

Maddening. :)
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