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SOteric Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-03-04 12:59 AM
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Poetry Thread
Because sometimes you just have to write down all the things that keep you from getting work done...


With you I begin
to find my self again.

With you I remember
the most basic pattern
sense the warm pulse,
move closer
beat by beat.

Pray for open arms.
Hold open the possibility
so often impossible.



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ornotna Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-03-04 01:18 AM
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1. That's very nice
we have some amazing word smiths here at DU. :toast:
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jpgray Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-03-04 01:59 AM
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2. Here's a long one I wrote some years ago
When Theofanis walked into the park,
he saw his brothers sprawled beneath two trees,
discussing something on the Alpheios.

So Theofanis said, “Soterios
and Yannis, what is it you two remark?”

“The bridge,” Soterios replied. “It lies
upon those two green banks down to the south.”
And Theofanis saw it then: a thin
stone line where black shapes moved, and so he said:

“Mark well the structure of it, brothers. See
its purpose, to create a passage where
men walk on water without any fear.
Foundations laid on land, it sprang from stone,
and then possessed a purpose wholly strange,
apart from land and all its elements.
So too is man, created from the beasts,
an aspirant to higher things than that
with which he was created at the start.”

“But then,” Soterios remarked, “I see
our lives much more between the banks
than in good earth, and that seems very sad.
To watch the people cross our Alpheios,
one easily can guess they have a goal,
be it the east or western bank, to reach.
Imagine trips of not some seconds, but
of three billions of years, since life began.
If we did rise above the lowly beasts
and learned to wish for better life, some glimpse
of things beyond the stars, then that is all
a western bank to us, and we long left
our bestial nature on the eastern shore.
Still, we are well above the flowing water:
the bridge may cast us down to drown and die
without our reaching sacred heights of thought,
as did those species, great and ancient long
before us, gone and buried into time.”

“Young Yannis,” said the brothers to the youth,
“you have been very quiet all this time.
Are there not some thoughts you’d care to share?”

“Well,” Yannis said. “The bridge is quite like us,
and it is very sad, just as you say.
But where in nature have you seen a bridge?
Are they not sometimes built without our hands?
Just yesterday I stumbled on a bridge
of stones and dirt, and not unlike to man’s.
The river sediment had ‘built’ it there.
You, Soterios, you speak of man
achieving something sacred in his life,
and Theofanis, you still represent
our thoughts as miracles wrought out of void,
as though we men do represent the best
of all the beasts that ever were alive.
This bridge of dirt and stone, it has no base.
These banks are both the same. Indeed the whole
is earth and thus, created of itself,
it forms no more than it contained before.
Those men of vaunted progress, all they are
are stones and dirt, quite blindly building up
a bridge that long ago made crossing safe.
It now becomes a ziggurat so high
the river’s width is more than twice surpassed
when matched against the bridge’s untamed height.
To cross the water into sacred thoughts
is now made much more difficult to men.
The rules of nature still apply to us:
we build our bridges out of our own selves—
we base them from our minds; but in the end
the other shores are also flesh and bone.”
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-03-04 02:01 AM
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3. nicely done.
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scubadude Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-03-04 02:44 AM
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4. With you,,,,,
I remember what it is to fear again.

The quick pulse of feet making me feel chased

The rush of realising that most have no heart, don't understand and why can't they see?

The crystal clear knowledge that what you see on tv isn't real, especially when it is claimes to be....

70 people made to look like hundreds tearing down a statue, thousands tearing down an effigy who are invisible

We don't live in America any longer, we live in the state of fear
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proud patriot Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-03-04 02:45 AM
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5. just in case you missed I wrote a poem , It's my sigline
my poems are pretty dark .
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-03-04 02:47 AM
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6. Nawwww.... THIS is dark... Hehe
They are the silent.
Reticent cogs, silent mules,
tacit army-

Docile drawing force that dreams
of sex and pick-up trucks.
Of paying next month's rent.
Of six packs in the dust.

strong backs, long backs
arms and legs and hands,
they facilitate facility
denying lust that calls...

"Hallelujah, hallelujah,"
calling through
the hallowed halls,

We're only half past
destitute.
They have us by the balls!

The workers of America
struggle to survive
as they manufacture widgets
never working nine to five

like the bankers and the lawyers
insurance folk and brokers
who turn a tidy profit
juggling money, choking smokers.

The reality of life for these,
the masses building life
for those, consumptuous bleeding
breeding grogs who love the mighty widget’s

lure is fucking in the moonlight
hidden by the Chevy's dash
while dreaming soporific dreams
of bringing home the cash.
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Booberdawg Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-03-04 05:26 AM
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7. Well,
I have no talent whatsoever
to - oh - who the fuck ever

I went out last night; that is unusual
It was a reunion - and an occasion for perusal

We laughed, some cried, we kissed, we hugged
My pissed off comrades have more to lose, so they're still bugged.

I don't know what to say, because I've already been though hell.
But my 2 income family friends are behaving like they just now hear that bell??

What can I say - I love my friends.
Even they, will find means to an end.

How was THAT for no poetic talent and half drunk. :D
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Iverson Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-03-04 07:21 AM
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8. 600 Years of Modernism
It's long, so I offer just the first stanza.

Whanne I wol haven headache,
I have two Anacin.
Ye woot it semeth ilke moone
Whanne ful, and ek the sonne.
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