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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-16-06 07:01 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poetry Thread Sat 9/16/2006
Good morning everyone. RL is in Minnesota still and asked me to fill in again. :hi:

Learning to Float

Relax. It's like love. Keep your lips
moist and parted, let your upturned hands
unfold like water lilies, palms exposed.

Breathe deeply, slowly. Forget chlorine
and how the cement bottom was stained
blue so the water looks clear

and Caribbean. Ignore the drowned mosquitoes,
the twigs that gather in the net
of your hair. The sun is your ticket,

your narcotic, blessing your chin,
the floating islands of your knees.
Shut your eyes and give yourself

to the pulsating starfish, purple and red,
that flicker on your inner lids.
Hallucination is part of the process,

like amnesia. Forget how you learned
to swim, forget being told
Don't panic. Don't worry. Let go

of my neck. It's only water. Don't think
unless you're picturing Chagall,
his watercolors of doves and rooftops,

lovers weightless as tissue,
gravity banished, the dissolving voices
of violins and panpipes. The man's hand

circles the woman's wrist so loosely,
what moors her permits her to float,
and she rises past the water's skin,

above verandas and the tossing heads
of willows. Her one link to earth,
his light-almost reluctant-touch, is a rope

unfurling, slipping her past the horizon,
into the cloud-stirring current. This far up,
what can she do but trust he won't let her go?
---April Lindner
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-16-06 10:44 AM
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1. My dear miss_american_pie........
This is lovely, and an excellent choice!

He's busy moving his books today, isn't he?

This poem catches perfectly the sensation of floating.....

It's an excellent metaphor for loving someone, and for trusting them....

Thank you for filling in so well!

:hug:
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-16-06 10:52 AM
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2. Thanks Peggy
Yes, he's moving books today and from the "sound" of his PM he'll be quite busy. :)
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tinfoil tiaras Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-16-06 10:57 AM
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3. Wow
I really like this. I love the symbolism and the use of metaphors (wow I sound like I'm in english class or something...haha).

I'm gonna have to put a snippet of this on my AIM profile :D
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-16-06 11:25 AM
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4. I like the enjambed lines
How's that for English class? :hi:
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tinfoil tiaras Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-16-06 11:43 AM
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5. Awesome
I feel so smart now...:D
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