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LiberalVoice Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Dec-21-03 05:24 PM
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Darkened Heart a poem...
I wrote this poem the other night and have been meaning to share it with all of you. I write alot of peotry most of which I hate. But, for some reason I really like this one...

Lemme know what you all think. :)

Darkened Heart

My heart follows blindly
Keeping the beat alive
The pounding echoes in me
Attempting to contrive

Its running through my body
From head to toe it seeps
My mind is rolling faster
Almost too quick to keep

Inside of me it's hurt
For so long it seemed
Almost like it should have been
It should have been in me

I've always been aware
Aware of these dark scenes
Askew of shadowed symbolisms
Hatreds figurines

Too young to know it then
Fate loves to thumb its strings
Played out like a banshee
The horrid notes she sings

I couldn't comprehend it
My mind it could not see
How I lay here thinking
Inside it stirring me

The roles have now been switched
Im now the transposition
I'd like to think prepared
A more complete accession

After all this thinking
I thought I'd be well off
Instead my heart burns darker
The beat, it tapers off...
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rumguy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Dec-21-03 05:27 PM
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1. nice poem
it's rare these days to see a poem written in ryhme
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