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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-14-06 06:43 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 8/14/06)
Mad Girl's Love Song

"I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

The stars go waltzing out in blue and red,
And arbitrary blackness gallops in:
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.

I dreamed that you bewitched me into bed
And sung me moon-struck, kissed me quite insane.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

God topples from the sky, hell's fires fade:
Exit seraphim and Satan's men:
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.

I fancied you'd return the way you said,
But I grow old and I forget your name.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

I should have loved a thunderbird instead;
At least when spring comes they roar back again.
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)"

Sylvia Plath

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RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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Callalily Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-14-06 07:34 AM
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1. Unrequited love?
Hmmmmm . . .
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-14-06 11:11 AM
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2. Hmmmmm...
:hi:

RL
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idgiehkt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-14-06 11:16 AM
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3. God Bless You.
Edited on Mon Aug-14-06 11:22 AM by idgiehkt
sigh. I love this woman. She and Gwendolyn Brooks can *editing* do masculine rhyme well. I can't do it so good, it always sounds forced when I try to.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-14-06 07:08 PM
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4. Yes, it did come natural for her
it seems, but I am sure she worked hard at it.

It's a challenge...

:hi:

RL
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GOPisEvil Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-14-06 07:10 PM
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5. Sigh...
:argh::cry::banghead:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-14-06 07:12 PM
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6. I understand my brother...
I do...

RL
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