Death sometimes comes in a dream

[GoddessOfGuinness]

Holding me tenderly,
Whisp'ring the delights awaiting me
In that ineluctable euphoria.

Too soon, when my waking nears,
His lips caress my cheek,
And Death gently implores my patience;
Despite my desire, it is not yet my time.

The dream...the sweetness of it
Loiters around my heart
Until my mind begins to wonder
If I'll have to nag him to take out the trash.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

1. My dear GoddessofGuinness!

What a tender and beautiful poem!

Until..........ZAP!

That last line!

Where did you get this?

I love it!

:rofl: :rofl:

[GoddessOfGuinness]

2. It was bouncing around in my head the last couple of days

Glad you like! :D

[CaliforniaPeggy]

3. So.........you wrote this?

Well, sweetie.......

You have a gift!

I mean, really......I thought this had been written by a professional writer......

Are you?

You should be, if you're not already!

:patriot:

[GoddessOfGuinness]

4. Aww shucks...

Thanks, Peggy!

I'm not a pro. If I were, I'd probably come down with writer's block. Thanks for your encouragement, though! :D

[CaliforniaPeggy]

6. I dabble a little myself......

I have a story in the Writer's Forum......

The Game....

Go check it out.........

But please comment via PM.......I don't want it bumped up any more!

That is, if you feel like commenting! :blush:

[GoddessOfGuinness]

8. I will!

But I think I'll save it for tomorrow, when I'm in a less fuzzy state of mind.

I'm looking forward to it! :hug:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

9. Thanks!

You won't be sorry, either....

Although it does need editing..........

Anyway.............let me know!

[GoddessOfGuinness]

10. I'm having trouble finding it, Peggy.

Could you post a link? Thanks! :D

[CaliforniaPeggy]

11. Here's your link! Sorry I didn't see this earlier..........

Enjoy! And remember....PM or here in your thread!


http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=show_mesg&forum=216&topic_id=2826&mesg_id=2826

[GoddessOfGuinness]

12. And she scores!

I like your story, Peggy. It puts an interesting twist on the "sports widow" phenomenon. Sexy stuff! :toast:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

14. Glad you liked it!

I had fun writing it..........

[GoddessOfGuinness]

18. So when's your next installment?

You could even illustrate with your photos. At least, you could illustrate some things... :evilgrin:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

19. I am working on my next installment.......

It is proving to be more difficult to write......*sigh*

Illustrations? Are you trying to get me banned???

No fucking way, baby!

ROFLMFAO......

[GoddessOfGuinness]

20. You could spin them into a steamy novel

And illustrate your cover...

[Floogeldy]

5. This would never happen if you would just take out the trash yourself.

:)

[GoddessOfGuinness]

7. I usually do anyway.

I hate to nag. But I also hate having 0 help around here. Sux.

[BreweryYardRat]

13. *snort*

I like it. :)

[GoddessOfGuinness]

15. Thanks for reading!

:beer:

[tigereye]

16. make the kids take out the trash!

nice poem! A bit of the 16th century there. Until the trash part!

Like a song from Black Adder!

[GoddessOfGuinness]

17. Oh yeah...

Sometimes I forget that's why we have them... :rofl:

[GoddessOfGuinness]

21. tweaking

for the hell of it.

[GoddessOfGuinness]

24. just once more

[Deja Q]

22. Been hanging around me lately?

:rofl:
:cry:

[GoddessOfGuinness]

23. Do you wait until the can is overflowing

before taking it outside? It's ok. You're still cute. :hug: