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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-28-06 11:24 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sun 5/28/06)
Edited on Sun May-28-06 11:28 AM by RetroLounge
There, there

He'd left her two years ago but she could still at night
put her hand between her legs and he would be there on top
of her saying Come for me and when she couldn't she'd
remember the little hotel in Mexico with the round white
tables and folded umbrellas and after they married his
snakeskin boots at the end of the bed with black satin
sheets but still she couldn't come masturbating alone in the
dark, so she thought of standing naked while he held an
open safety pin dragging the tiny sharp silver point
delicately over her breasts, pulling her to the floor where
later she ground broken glass into the cracked red and
white linoleum with her heel, and he would grab her so
hard sometimes she felt she'd never been truly held before
and she said Go further, take me further, and when the
final papers came she got drunk as usual and drove to his
old flat he'd moved back into and knelt on his doorstep
saying his name over and over into the mail slot, through it
she could see part of the hallway he'd led her down once
and tied her up and shaved her and she said Now I'm yours
and she was and he was holding her I love you come for
me and she came, and it was raining and down the hall
of the rooming house someone's travel alarm was going
bleep-bleep-bleep without stopping and there was nothing
to drink and no one to say There, there while she cried.

Kim Addonizio

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RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-28-06 09:18 PM
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1. Wow, not a single reply?
That's never happenned before...

:shrug:

RL
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WritingIsMyReligion Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-28-06 09:20 PM
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2. Erotica again, I see.
:eyes:

:P :P

:thumbsup:

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-28-06 09:21 PM
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3. and your point is?
:shrug:

RL
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WritingIsMyReligion Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-28-06 09:22 PM
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4. I don't have one.
That's m'point.

:D

:P
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-28-06 09:24 PM
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5. Good point.
:hi:

RL
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WritingIsMyReligion Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-28-06 09:26 PM
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6. LOL!
:D
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SeattleGirl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-28-06 09:54 PM
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7. Wow.
Wow. Wish it didn't have that heartbreaking ending, but without it, it would not have been as powerful a piece.

Thanks RL.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-28-06 11:30 PM
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8. My dear RetroLounge!
Wow, this one is heartbreaking!

Such vivid images, too.....

It makes me weep.....the poem does.....:cry:

So much loss after so much joy......

Thank you


:loveya: :hug:
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