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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 10:10 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Thu 3/16/06)
Happiness

A man and a woman lie on a white bed.
It is morning. I think
Soon they will waken.
On the bedside table is a vase
of lilies; sunlight
pools in their throats.
I watch him turn to her
as though to speak her name
but silently, deep in her mouth--
At the window ledge,
once, twice,
a bird calls.
And then she stirs; her body
fills with his breath.

I open my eyes; you are watching me.
Almost over this room
the sun is gliding.
Look at your face, you say,
holding your own close to me
to make a mirror.
How calm you are. And the burning wheel
passes gently over us.

Louise Gluck

********************

RL

Checkout the Daily Poem Archive at:
http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.ph ...

and if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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RevCheesehead Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 10:15 AM
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1. It's really nice to see you posting happy stuff again.
I'll take that as a good sign. :hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 10:19 AM
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3. I had 8 hours of sleep!
It's a frickin' miracle! and I feel good! Huh!

of course double doses of Zoloft help too...

:rofl:

RL
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RevCheesehead Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 10:46 AM
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5. Sleep - I remember that.
Actually, it's getting better. I'll do even better when I get back to my own bed. (*%&@%* hideabed sofas!)

Are you working today, or did you get a snow day?
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 11:08 AM
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6. Took the rest of the week off
The movers are here now moving the LARGE objects out of the house.

Tomorrow the new appliances come to the old house.

Lots to do.

But by tonight my JukeBox will be in the livingroom and playing some original Elvis 45's! Yay!

:hi:

RL
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In_The_Wind Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 10:19 AM
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2. Just beautiful!
Thank you. :loveya:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 10:20 AM
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4. as are you...
:hug:

RL
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In_The_Wind Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 01:05 PM
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14. Thank you, RL.
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LaraMN Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 11:09 AM
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7. Um... I want to wake up like that!
I got the bleating alarm clock, and fifteen minutes to throw on my clothes and my face, to meet my friend for our morning run, today. :P Not quite on the same level...
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 11:14 AM
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8. How do you like running in all that snow?
:shrug:

RL
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LaraMN Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 11:17 AM
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9. I don't, silly!
I run in the street! :rofl: Though trudging through snow can be a good workout in itself... I prefer to use the snow for these:


:bounce: :rofl:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 11:23 AM
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10. Are you making snow angels?
or collapsing after running?

RL
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LaraMN Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 11:31 AM
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11. In that picture I was making snow angels. It was one of a series,
waaay back when the snow was new, and the temps were still relatively forgiving. I'd much rather lay on my back in the grass, now. Or better yet, in a heap of petals, a'la:

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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 11:39 AM
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12. petals sounds better
and warmer..

RL
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LaraMN Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 11:47 AM
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13. Warmer...
not if one follows the method depicted in the film...


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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 01:11 PM
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15. Ah, my dear RetroLounge!
How gently erotic this one is........

I kept waiting for it to get more explicit, but it didn't.....

And that's OK.....

It is so beautiful!

Thank you.......

:loveya: :hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 05:56 PM
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16. gently erotic...
good description...

:hi:

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 06:16 PM
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17. I have a white bed
Might have to try this out.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 06:17 PM
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18. Take pics...
:D

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 06:20 PM
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21. Just so you know
I wasn't going to do it alone.

You still want pics?
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 06:21 PM
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22. of course...
I'm not that way, I'm open to anything...

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 06:22 PM
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24. I'll have to ask
But he doesn't seem shy.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 10:45 PM
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25. Neither do you...
:hug:

RL
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SeattleGirl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 06:18 PM
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19. Absolutely beautiful, RL
:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 06:22 PM
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23. Glad you like it...
:hi:

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 06:19 PM
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20. delete
Edited on Thu Mar-16-06 06:20 PM by yvr girl
replied in the wrong place.
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aaronbees Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-16-06 11:38 PM
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26. That's hot...
and yet so restrained -- that's why she's the master. Gluck's love poems have such great tension, which makes thems all the sweeter for it. RL, you've posted both her and Sharon Olds lately ... great reads! :)
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