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The Pain Donating Member (30 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 06:22 AM
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I need Help and FAST!!!!
Edited on Fri Feb-24-06 07:11 AM by The Pain
Ok, I'm turning in a paper for English comp in...... *checks watch* more or less 11 hours from now.
That's all fine and stuff, but I got 3 others papers to type up. (yes, bad Pain, no more procrastinating!) so I need people to read them over, see if I screwed any grammer up, if there are places I can improve, stuff like that.
Ok, yeah, so that's it. Here is the one I am most worried about.

I think you all will like it.

Should the President Should Be Impeached?
The question posed is very simple; it takes little thought to answer if you are self aware of the current situation the country is in. Are you happy with the President? A vast majority of Americans, some 90%, would say No. It seems like a pointless question, so another question which 100% of Americans said yes to is imposed. Are you Aware of the Abu Ghraib scandal, one where United States soldiers beat and killed prisoners, be they civilian or militant, innocent or guilt. and also kidnapped and used family members of the detainee as bargaining chips for information, (Seattle) and in a few cases Raped the small children of a prisoner to force a confession out of him? (Herald) Were you aware that this was not an isolated event? (CS) The abuse has also been seen at Guantanamo Bay prison in Cuba, an America run “Terror” prison. The sad thing of torture is that it can be hidden behind a veil of patriotism and good intention, though the road to hell is well paved over time and time again with good intentions. Some things though can not be overwritten. Some things go too deep, too far for one to be able to pave over his telltale heart. The Geneva conventions say this about civilian hospitals in a time of war. Part II Chapter 3 of the Geneva convention “Civilian hospitals organized to give care to the wounded and sick, the infirm and maternity cases, may in no circumstances be the object of attack but shall at all times be respected and protected by the Parties to the conflict.” (Geneva) A story came out of the news, one of soldiers raiding a hospital in order to free a US Soldier being treated there. (Post) The story of a captured Jessica Lynch being picked up by a squad of US soldiers sent in by general’s orders to bring her back. Though one side of this story is less spoken of, this is the one of Doctors and hospital patients themselves being forced out of their beds, handcuffed or shackled while forced onto the floor for the duration of the “Rescue” As defined by The Geneva conventions, this act is NO Less then War Crimes, and Crimes Against Humanity for the civilian patients involved. (Cuffed)
Though, crimes against humanity do not have to occur across the world, they can happen much close to home. In 2005 A storm hit the Southern coast of America, one named Katrina by N.O.A.H. The area affected the most was New Orleans Louisiana. Five days prior to the storm hitting the Governor, Blanco, declared a state of emergency. The Bush Administration refused them aid, and later denied they had ever even declared a state of emergency. (Snopes) The following events are well known, one of FEMA not giving aid till four days after the storm had passed and the city was doomed, Of George thanking Brown, the former director of FEMA for his dismal failure “You’re doing a heck of a job Browny” is the now famous quote. Thousands were stranded at the Superdome, while bodies of the dead lay on the street outside and in the water. Those of rape, murder, and starvation of the people held captive in that dome while the government refused to let Aid come into the city. (Aid)


Americans are guaranteed the right to a democratic election of their leaders. Twice now this right has been inarguably taken away, such a vulgar display of disregard for the electoral process was noticed by all fifty who were asked.. In 2004 there were massive cases of voter fraud in Florida. Cases of black voters not being allowed into polling places at all, of voters taken off the registered voter list for having names similar to those of convicted felons. A striking amount of dead voters cast their ballots along with US Servicemen turning in their ballots in too late. Along with a punchcard voting system that was known to be flawed and yet still used, a tally was made, and in the end former Vice President Al Gore was said to be the popular vote leader, the Supreme Court ruled in favor of George W. Bush.(Fraud)
History did just as it said it would, repeating itself again in 2004. The election seemed clear cut with George Bush as the winner yet again, though this time winning in three swing states instead of the one. Since the election and up to this day news of abhorrent yet impossibly similar fraud has yet again surfaced, bringing a new light upon the outcome. In Palm Beach Florida alone, there has been a count of over One Hundred Thousand Die Bold Voting Machine voting errors alone during the 2004 election. (Wow)
Though a defense should be brought up for each American. While elections may be debatable, along with the war the president has started, it is not a good idea to change leaders in the middle of a war. Though former president Truman may disagree, the strength of the country could weaken under new rule, the goal of the former president weakened and taken off track. Troops could be demoralized and the over all message to the world could then be skewed, a chain reaction of death, destruction and chaos from the removal from power of one man. The cost as well could be tremendous to the country. A nation already far in debt could be plunged even further by the trial of its leader. During the Clinton impeachment the total cost of the proceeding were exceeding 1.2 million dollars. (Impeach). With the list of impeachable offenses, and the time it took to simply resolve one issue of impeachment, the impeachment trial of President George Bush could run into the hundred millions, a price almost as much as a single day at war In Iraq (177 Million- (Clock))
The information is there for all to see. Simply the beginning of a long list of reasons, calling to action a life saving event. The reasons against it are few and far between, an obvious fault to a logistical argument against the one presented now. War crimes, crimes against humanity both home and abroad, not even to mention an unjust war and two questionable elections stand firm in fact to any opposing argument to the impeachment of the man inhabiting the office of President of the United States. There is one final question, that of which the others asked the questioned you to comprehend. A question that Seven short of all asked said a firm “Yes” to. Should the president be impeached?





yeah, so if you notice any misspellings, grammer, or just don't understand what I am saying. Or hell just have some recomendations tell me.

And I need these posts fast <.<


(quick note, my polls are based off of one I took asking 50 people (project minimum 40) so that's why they seem odd.)
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tjwmason Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 06:27 AM
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1. What level of paper is this?
High School, college &c.
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The Pain Donating Member (30 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 06:34 AM
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2. College
But it's an intro to english class, a 4 page minimum, so it doesn't have to be incredible, just follow the topic and meet the requirment
(For this it is 4 pages, Talking about a topic, using at least 6 sources in a debate style, stay out of first person, either interview someone or take a poll)
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tjwmason Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 06:48 AM
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5. Is it supposed to be balanced?
You mention debate style - in which case a piece of polemic could well be called for - but certainly when I was at university consideration of both sides of an issue was considered to be essential.
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henslee Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 06:41 AM
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3. "Should the, should president should be impeached????" WTF
You know what? This paper is way more fun with bad grammar. And I thought I was a screw up in school. I feel better now.
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The Pain Donating Member (30 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 06:43 AM
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4. Yeah, that was called for.
Asked for help, not ridicule
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henslee Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 06:59 AM
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6. A decent answer to this question must include a brief discussion
Edited on Fri Feb-24-06 07:01 AM by henslee
of the history of presidential impeachment and what exactlt makes an offense impeachable. In fact, that should be part of your introduction.

I would think you can google "grounds for impeachment" and "bush" and get some citable quotes.
http://www.cftech.com/BrainBank/SPECIALREPORTS/impeachment.html

(snip)

The Constitution deals with the subject of impeachment and conviction at six places. The scope of the power is set out in Article II, Section 4:

"The President, Vice President and all civil Officers of the United States, shall be removed from Office on Impeachment for, and Conviction of, Treason, Bribery, or other high Crimes and Misdemeanors."

Other provisions deal with procedures and consequences.


Article I, Section 2 states:



"The House of Representatives . . . shall have the sole Power of Impeachment."



Similarly, Article I, Section 3, describes the Senate's role:



"The Senate shall have the sole Power to try all Impeachments. When sitting for that Purpose, they shall be on Oath or Affirmation. When the President of the United States is tried, the Chief Justice shall preside: And no Person shall be convicted without the Concurrence of two thirds of the Members present."

;..........................................
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REP Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 07:07 AM
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7. Okay, In The First Few Sentences...
Edited on Fri Feb-24-06 07:07 AM by REP
The question posed is very simple; it takes little thought to answer if you are self aware of the current situation the country is in.

One need not be "self aware" of an external political situation.

Are you happy with the President? I vast majority of Americans, some 90% would say No.

Seems as though some quotes are missing, and perhaps a word? "I vast" s/b "A vast"? s/b a comma after "90%."

It seems like a pointless question, one of an opinion that can be formed in seconds, not truly following whether or not the questioned truly feels that way.

Too many words, and too many in an order that make no sense. If this is a polemic, "This seems like a pointless question" would suffice. The existing sentence makes no sense grammatically plus it sounds pretentious.

Overall: too wordy. Way too wordy. Just say what you want to say without dressing it up with verbal acrobatics.
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The Pain Donating Member (30 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 07:11 AM
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8. Thank you *fixes what he pointed out, and works on a paragraph about the
impeachment process
*is updating his paper in his first post as well*
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REP Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 07:33 AM
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10. "He"?
Heh!
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RebelOne Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 07:22 AM
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9. Here is a version with a few corrections.
Should the President Should Be Impeached?
The question posed is very simple; it takes little thought to answer if you are self aware of the current situation the country is in. Are you happy with the President? A vast majority of Americans, some 90%, would say No. It seems like a pointless question, one of an opinion that can be formed in seconds, not truly following whether or not the questioned truly feels that way. So another question which 100% of Americans said yes to is imposed. Are you aware of the Abu Ghraib scandal, one where United States soldiers beat and killed prisoners, be they civilian or militant, innocent or guilty, and also kidnapped and used family members of the detainee as bargaining chips for information (Seattle), and in a few cases, raped the small children of a prisoner to force a confession out of him? (Herald) Were you aware that this was not an isolated event? (CS) The abuse has also been seen at Guantanamo Bay prison in Cuba, an America-run “Terror” prison. The sad thing of torture is that it can be hidden behind a veil of patriotism and good intention, though the road to hell is well paved over time and time again with good intentions. Some things, though, cannot be overwritten. Some things go too deep, too far for one to be able to pave over his telltale heart. The Geneva convention says this about civilian hospitals in a time of war. Part II, Chapter 3 of the Geneva convention: “Civilian hospitals organized to give care to the wounded and sick, the infirm and maternity cases, may in no circumstances be the object of attack but shall at all times be respected and protected by the parties to the conflict.” (Geneva) A story came out of the news, one of soldiers raiding a hospital in order to free a U.S. soldier being treated there. (Post) The story of a captured Jessica Lynch being picked up by a squad of U.S. soldiers sent in by a general’s orders to bring her back. Though one side of this story is less spoken of, this is the one of doctors and hospital patients themselves being forced out of their beds, handcuffed or shackled while forced onto the floor for the duration of the “Rescue.” As defined by the Geneva convention, this act is NO Less then War Crimes, and Crimes Against Humanity for the civilian patients involved. (Cuffed)

Though, crimes against humanity do not have to occur across the world, they can happen much closer to home. In 2005, A storm hit the southern coast of America, one named Katrina by N.O.A.H. The area affected the most was New Orleans, Louisiana. Five days before the storm hit, Governor Blanco declared a state of emergency. The Bush Administration refused them aid, and later denied they had ever even declared a state of emergency. (Snopes) The following events are well known, one of FEMA not giving aid till four days after the storm had passed and the city was doomed, Of George thanking Brown, the former director of FEMA for his dismal failure: “You’re doing a heck of a job, Brownie” is the now famous quote. Thousands were stranded at the Superdome while bodies of the dead lay on the street outside and in the water. Those of rape, murder, and starvation of the people held captive in that dome while the government refused to let aid come into the city. (Aid)
Americans are guaranteed the right to a democratic election of their leaders. Twice now this right has been inarguably taken away. In 2004, there were massive cases of voter fraud in Florida. Cases of black voters not being allowed into polling places at all, of voters taken off the registered voter list for having names similar to those of convicted felons. A striking amount of dead voters cast their ballots along with U.S. servicemen turning in their ballots in too late. Along with a punchcard voting system that was known to be flawed and yet still used, a tally was made, and in the end, former Vice President Al Gore was said to be the popular vote leader, but the Supreme Court ruled in favor of George W. Bush.(Fraud)
History did just as it said it would, repeating itself again in 2004. The election seemed clear cut with George Bush as the winner yet again, though this time winning in three swing states instead of the one. Since the election and up to this day, news of abhorrent yet impossibly similar fraud has yet again surfaced, bringing a new light upon the outcome. In Palm Beach Florida alone, there has been a count of over One Hundred Thousand Diebold voting machine errors alone during the 2004 election. (Wow!)

Though a defense should be brought up for each American. While elections may be debatable, along with the war the president has started, it is not a good idea to change leaders in the middle of a war. Though former president Truman may disagree, the strength of the country could weaken under new rule, the goal of the former president weakened and taken off track. Troops could be demoralized and the overall message to the world could then be skewed, a chain reaction of death, destruction and chaos from the removal from power of one man. The cost as well could be tremendous to the country. A nation already far in debt could be plunged even further by the trial of its leader. During the Clinton impeachment, the total cost of the proceeding were exceeding 1.2 million dollars. (Impeach). With the list of impeachable offenses, and the time it took to simply resolve one issue of impeachment, the impeachment trial of President George Bush could run into the hundreds of millions, a price almost as much as a single day at war In Iraq (177 Million). (Clock)
The information is there for all to see. Simply the beginning of a long list of reasons, calling to action a life-saving event. The reasons against it are few and far between, an obvious fault to a logistical argument against the one presented now. War crimes, crimes against humanity both home and abroad, not even to mention an unjust war and two questionable elections, stand firm, in fact, to any opposing argument to the impeachment of the man inhabiting the office of President of the United States. There is one final question, that of which the others asked the questioned you to comprehend. A question that Seven short of all asked, said a firm “Yes” to. Should the president be impeached?
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The Pain Donating Member (30 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 07:35 AM
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11. on a quasi related topic
What are some good reasons John Boehner is not a good choice for Repub leadership? Outside of his handing out checks to on the senate floor (already have that one)
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Commie Pinko Dirtbag Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-24-06 08:03 AM
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12. Welcome to DU
You sure chose a spot-on username.
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