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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 04:17 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 12/5/05)
Alive Together

Speaking of marvels, I am alive
together with you, when I might have been
alive with anyone under the sun,
when I might have been Abelard's woman
or the whore of a Renaissance pop
or a peasant wife with not enough food
and not enough love, with my children
dead of the plague. I might have slept
in an alcove next to the man
with the golden nose, who poked it
into the business of stars,
or sewn a starry flag
for a general with wooden teeth.
I might have been the exemplary Pocahontas
or a woman without a name
weeping in Master's bed
for my husband, exchanged for a mule,
my daughter, lost in a drunken bet.
I might have been stretched on a totem pole
to appease a vindictive god
or left, a useless girl-child,
to die on a cliff. I like to think
I might have been Mary Shelley
in love with a wrong-headed angel,
or Mary's friend. I might have been you.
This poem is endless, the odds against us are endless,
our chances of being alive together
statistically nonexistent;
still we have made it, alive in a time
when rationalists in square hats
and hatless Jehovah's Witnesses
agree it is almost over,
alive with our lively children
who--but for endless ifs--
might have missed out on being alive
together with marvels and follies
and longings and lies and wishes
and error and humor and mercy
and journeys and voices and faces
and colors and summers and mornings
and knowledge and tears and chance.

Lisel Mueller

************************************************

RL
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SeattleGirl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 04:20 AM
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1. Bravo, RL!
Thank you, again!
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 11:10 AM
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7. Glad you like it.
:hi:

RL
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threehensandacow Donating Member (104 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 09:16 AM
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2. what are you doing,
trying to make me feel better?
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 11:10 AM
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6. Always...
I do what little I can...

:hug:

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 09:53 AM
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3. That is wonderful
Thank you.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 11:09 AM
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5. You are welcome
:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 10:44 AM
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4. My dear RetroLounge....
How beautiful this is.......

I can, for obscure reasons, really relate to this one.

The random chance of love, of meeting and loving someone...this poem states it so very well.

Beautiful.....thank you...
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 11:11 AM
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8. Good morning, my friend.
glad you like this one, I really do too.

:hug: :hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 11:21 AM
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9. My dear RetroLounge....
If you would check your PM, please....I'm signing off now, but I'll be back later......To see what you have to say to me.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 12:03 PM
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11. Check your PM
and a great big :hug: to you...

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 01:07 PM
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17. I got it, and thank you, my dear RetroLounge.....
:hug: back atcha.....
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 03:51 PM
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22. Again, PM coming your way
:hug:

RL
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Callalily Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 11:25 AM
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10. Very touching and
moving poem. I'm so glad that you post these. I look forward to your selections every day.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 12:04 PM
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12. Glad you like these.
I will keep it up as long as people are reading them. And maybe even if they are not :D

:hi:

RL

p.s. where in our fair state are you?
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Callalily Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 01:41 PM
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19. Hometown is
near Green Bay!
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Rising Phoenix Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 12:05 PM
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13. I love this one...
thanks retro
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 01:03 PM
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15. My pleasure...
Good to see you here in the poetry thread!

:hi:

RL
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bicentennial_baby Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 03:01 PM
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21. me too sweetie
isn't it beautiful? :loveya:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 04:12 PM
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23. Hello!
Good to see you here my friend.

:hug: :hi:

RL
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bicentennial_baby Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 04:51 PM
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24. Been away for a few days
as usual...3 days in heaven, sigh...and now back to my mundane M-F existence x(

:hi: :hug:
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LynzM Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 12:15 PM
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14. Beautiful, thank you!
:) :hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 01:04 PM
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16. You are most welcome
:hug: :hi: :D

RL
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 01:13 PM
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18. thanks for posting these...I always read them but sometimes I
forget to post a comment....I especially "enjoyed" today's. They all seem to resonate...today's even more so
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 01:59 PM
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20. Good to see you!
:hi:

RL
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 07:25 PM
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25. After DInner Poetry Kick
:kick:

RL
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RevCheesehead Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-05-05 07:34 PM
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26. The "guest room" is always open....
And, of course, there's Oshkosh, Appleton, Fond du Lac....
or even Lambeau Field.

:loveya:
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