A poem in three parts. Maybe
oneighty
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Thu Apr-21-05 03:13 PM
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A poem in three parts. Maybe
Batten Down the Hatches Lads the Captain Is Singing his Song. The eastern wind blowed full our sagging sails And blowed us west to the Legend Land Where the sun rose up dripping red Rose up from the bloody sea. (Chorus) Where the sun rose up dripping red rose up from the bloody sea. Batten down the hatches lads the Captain is singing his song. The winds blowed up purple and fast Blue lightning flashed And the lightning splashed Blue on the bloody sea. (Chorus) The winds blowed up purple and fast. Batten down the hatches lads the Captain is singing his song. We heard from afar the Siren's song And high on her waves we flew And quick at last she wrecked us fast On the shores of the Legend Land (Chorus) And quick at last she wrecked him fast on the shores of Legend Land. Batten down the hatches lads the Captain is singing his song I woke alone with broken bones Upon that distant shore And the sun rose high in the redding sky And she shed her warmth on me (Chorus) And the sun rose high in the redding sky and she shed her warmth on him Batten down the hatches lads the Captain is singing his song The sun moved west across the sky And cast her shadows long Then the dark stole in with Pirate stealth As the dark will often do (Chorus) Then the dark stole in with Pirate stealth as the dark will often do Batten down the hatches lads the Captain is singing his song I woke again with morning light The Siren hovering over me Hovering as might a bird in flight While humming her Siren song (Chorus) She hovered as might a bird in flight while humming her Siren song. Batten down the hatches lads the Captain is singing his song. End page one. 180
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Thu Apr-21-05 03:31 PM
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1. Interesting sentiments, 180...
Doesn't rhyme too well...Did you write this? Don't mean to hurt your feelings, but it needs work, I think...
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Thu Apr-21-05 03:36 PM
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Edited on Thu Apr-21-05 03:40 PM by oneighty
We are putting it to music have a little fun with it. Damn the rime, full speed ahead. It is an opera. Hee hee hee. 180 PS when are you going to sea?
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Thu Apr-21-05 03:42 PM
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3. I have read the entire piece
and I think it is beautiful and well written
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Thu Apr-21-05 03:45 PM
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4. Should be good put to music! Good for you...I sure would NOT post
anything I've written like that...An opera? When do you open at the Met? hehehe... PS We are going to sea the end of June and into the start of July; still waiting for Libya to approve our visas...Thanks for asking! :loveya:
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Thu Apr-21-05 03:51 PM
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5. Why you would not post?
Enter the battle ground win some lose some. Fear not ever onward! I was in the Med June and July. Pretty good weather. No blue lightning. Except once I saw Saint Elmo's blue fire dancing around the top mast. That was off Korea in 52. Exciting 180
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Thu Apr-21-05 04:12 PM
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have a wonderful trip and come home with lots and lots of stories to tell
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