Dark Poetry for the New Forum

[sasquatch]

My first poetry post on the new DU


Vengence

by Jared Thacker

The ultimate gratification
justice is in your hands you think
the law cares not about you
Vengence is on your mind

You think about it everyday
the pain they caused
I will make them pay
Vengence is on your mind

They took what was important from you
it is always on your mind
make them feel the same way you do
Vengence is on your mind

The oppurtunity arises
your new goal is near
you will strike tonight
Vengence is on your mind

You stalk around thier home
sneak into the place
the last words they hear "Cut-ta-ho-tha"
Vengence is now what you commit

The hatchet is covered with blood
they lay "sentenced" all around
all blood quinches your thirst tonight
Vengence is in your soul

Your new addiction is worse than herion
you have no human compasion
the "guiltys" life means nothing to you now
Vengence becomes you

You serve "justice" for others
never being able to stop
you become less human everyday
Vengence rules you!!

leave comments below please

[Tinoire]

1. Keep writing Sasquatch!

Let it all out! That's what poetry is for so you can dump the feelings on the page and not have them tearing at your heart as much.

It's hard for me to comment on this one because the whole idea of vengeance is pretty alien to me. I liked your other one better!

And keep sharing them with us; I enjoy reading you :)

Peace

[sasquatch]

2. This is about the evil of man

when man stops showing reason, when it becomes animal/machine and starts destroying all in it's path. It came to my mind for some reason when I seen 60 minutes tonight about the women who's kids were kidnapped and taken to Saudi Arabia against thier will. Strange huh?