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WilliamPitt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 12:39 PM
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HELP: Here is my Union speech. Please vet for me.
Edited on Sat Aug-30-03 01:11 PM by WilliamPitt
Thanks!!!

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Did everyone have a nice weekend? Good. Thank a Union.

I was tempted to come in here today and deliver a speech about how profoundly important unions have been to the development of this nation, and to me personally. After all, I make my living as a writer. Before that, I made my living as a teacher. The bedrock abilities I need to do both those jobs were given to me by union teachers. A union taught me to read. A union taught me to write. Unions taught America to respect the rights and strengths of working people everywhere. I submit that an America with no union organization in the 20th century is an America most citizens would not be able to recognize, an America most citizens would want nothing to do with.

So, yeah, I thought about giving that speech. I figured it would be a home run ball. But then it struck me. First of all, you people don’t need to sit here and listen to someone wax poetic about the greatness of unions. You already know. Second of all, giving a speech like that, in this day and age, would be like sitting in the middle of a house fire talking about how warm and cozy we are. This house is on fire, and so today I want to talk to you about how we are going to stomp out those flames before they burn out everything that is important to us as citizens, and as a nation entire.

A man said, “On this Labor Day weekend, Americans pay tribute to the spirit of hard work and enterprise that has always made this nation strong. Every day, our workers go to factories and offices and farms and produce the world's finest goods and services. Their creativity and energy are the greatest advantage of the American economy.''

What man said that? George W. Bush said that, on Saturday, from his ranch in Crawford Texas. Does anyone else appreciate the irony? This house is on fire, and George is sitting in the front yard with a great big flamethrower and a grin on his face. The history of unions has always been a story of the people versus the powerful, the worker versus the bosses, the folks scratching to keep the lights on at home versus the folks taking CEO salaries home that are so big they need a fleet of Brinks trucks to drive them, laughing, all the way to the bank.

Some will argue that George W. Bush is a great leader. I would argue that he is a symbol, in more ways than one. As a leader he is literally symbolic, a figurehead – I mean, come on, folks, we all know George is not running things here. Blaming George W. Bush for the problems that his administration has caused is a lot like blaming Mickey Mouse when Disney screws up. I submit that if you go blaming George for our problems, you are barking up a wrong, very hollow tree.

But he is a symbol, and symbols are important. He is a symbol of our wretched estate. He is a symbol of what happens when workers stop believing that they have a say in their rights as workers. When that happens, guys like George find themselves able to run the show. And let’s face it, ladies and gentlemen: The incredible mess this Iraq war is, and is turning into, is nothing more or less than a prime example of what you get when you put the boss’ son in charge of the production lines.

It is all well and good for Mr. Bush to praise the greatness of the American worker. But it behooves us to look long and hard at how the American worker has fared under his administration, and to talk long and hard about what that record means to us, and to this country.

So let’s talk hard.

The Bush administration has proposed changes to the Fair Labor Standards Act that would strip millions and millions of American workers of the ability to earn overtime pay for overtime work. In this ongoing recession – helped in no small part by a couple of Bush administration tax cuts that were basically multi-billion dollar thank-you notes to the corporations that funded Bush’s 2000 campaign – in this on going recession, many many many American families depend on overtime pay to make ends meet. If the White House gets its way, that thin safety net will be gone.

We shouldn’t be surprised by this, by the cynical way Bush praises workers out of one side of his mouth while gutting their income out of the other. This administration has made much of the need to support our troops in Iraq, something I am sure each and every person in this room agrees with. How, then, does this administration think it is supporting the troops by pushing a policy to cut overtime pay for our soldiers still under fire in Iraq?

Such actions demonstrate a callousness of spirit that is as unpatriotic as anything I have ever heard of. When American workers and American soldiers are menaced by the economic policies of a sitting President, that sitting President should be made to stand, and walk, right out the White House door.

Let’s talk hard.

Let’s talk about the 11 million jobs lost in this country during the tenure of an administration that some maniacs decided to give Fast-Track treaty approval to. Jobs in automotive, aviation, computer, data-processing and software-programming, for starters, are sprinting overseas in an orgy of ‘outsourcing’ that will only be exacerbated by the Bush administration’s love affair with concepts like the Free Trade Area of the Americas zone.

I’m going to put my Wobbly hat on for a moment, and so I hope you will bear with me, because there are some old Wobbly ideas that deserve a second look in this brave new world. Those millions of outsourced jobs that union workers could be doing are leaving this country for one reason: Because the countries they are going to have no history of, nor protection for, collective bargaining to protect workers’ rights and workers’ wages. The companies that are outsourcing to China, to India, to Bangladesh, to the Philippines, are doing an end run around each and every one of us.

It can be argued that the process of ‘Economic Globalization’ has been going on since the first Chinese trader met the first Indian merchant on the Silk Road and said, “Have I got a deal for you.” It can be argued that globalization is inevitable, especially given the incredible technological leaps forward we make, seemingly on an hourly basis. But if that globalization is allowed to continue without giving workers around the world the ability to unionize, to fight for a living wage, to strike for the right to improve their lot, workers here in America and around the world will reap the whirlwind, will find their backs broken at the expense of bosses who have been historically allergic to giving their employees the rights they so richly deserve.

That, ladies and gentlemen, is what the Bush administration is symbolic of. They symbolize the repudiation of that right to collective bargaining that, simply put, made this country what it is today. They symbolize the stripping of your much-deserved power within this economy, for no other purpose than to empower the few over the many.

Talking hard is dangerous, especially these days. As a nation we have, since September 11, been cautious and deferential about criticizing the actions and ideologies of the boys and girls in Washington. We’ve had to deal with the idea, evinced clearly by this administration, that to criticize is to be unpatriotic. We’ve been told, by none other than White House spokesman Ari Fleischer, to “Watch what we say.”

I submit that union men and women have earned the right to speak openly and strongly against the direction this country is headed. They earned that right with the blood and lives of the union men and women who charged headlong into two burning buildings two years ago. Union men and union women do their jobs. On that dark day, union men and union women spent their lives on the job, and they did it without a second thought or a hesitating step. Union men and women earned the right to speak their minds after their fallen brothers and sisters were used by the Bush administration as props in a photo-op, and then were shamefully slapped across the face by that same administration.

Here’s the news, America. ‘Homeland Security’ is not a bunch of guys in black suits and sunglasses. Homeland Security is cops, and fire fighters, and emergency medial teams, all the people who work every day to save lives. Homeland Security on September 11 was union workers all, and those cops and fire fighters and EMTs have since had their funding eviscerated by an administration that took their pictures and then gave them the back of their hand.

Oh, yes, ladies and gentlemen, the right to speak out has been earned here.

Caution and deference have no place in this conversation anymore, I think. We gave those people our caution and deference, and they have paid us back by steamrolling us. So enough of caution. Enough of deference. It is time to talk hard. If we can’t speak the truth in the daylight, we will never be able to begin the process of changing that which desperately needs to be changed. Every great movement in history has begun with one thing: Words exchanged in truth between people of good conscience. So let us, as people of good conscience, exchange a few hard words in the hopes of beginning something whose time has come.

A long time ago, a man named Benito Mussolini invented something called Fascism. In the time since, fascism has come to be defined by Nazis, by war, and by crimes against humanity that defy description. But when Mussolini invented fascism, those definitions had not yet established themselves. Mussolini, the inventor of fascism, defined it differently. “The first stage of fascism,” said Mussolini, “should more appropriately be called Corporatism because it is a merger of state and Corporate power.”

Now, even with all my tough talk about hard words and doing away with caution, I am appropriately cautious about using so bloody a word in this setting. Well I should be. But I ask you: What do we have today if not the beginnings of the merging of state and corporate power? Even if you refuse to see our current situation through Mussolini’s eyes, even if you refuse to use that hardest of words, the simple fact that the corporate world and the federal government are becoming one and the same is clear, and unavoidable. Is that merger complete in America? Certainly not. Are we headed in that direction? Lawyers use a Latin phrase: “Res ipsa loquitor.” The thing speaks for itself.

What will the place of unions be in such a world? Where are the rights of workers?

I say unions and the rights of workers are and must continue to be at the forefront of a fight that is not new, but is now more desperate than it ever has been. There are millions and millions and millions of Americans who would join a union tomorrow if given the chance. We must fight to see that they are given that chance. A man staring down the barrel of a gun once said, “Don’t mourn. Organize.” We are staring down the barrel of a gun today, and if we don’t organize, we’re finished.

I believe, at the end of the day, that America is an idea, a dream. You can take away our cities, our roads, our crops, our armies, you can take all of that away, and the idea that is America will still be there, as pure and great as anything conceived by the human mind. I believe the idea that is America stands as the last, best hope for this world. When used properly, it can work wonders.

I believe that the idea, the dream, that is America was made possible by the men and women who lived and worked and died for the right of workers to stand collectively for themselves. The idea that is America would not exist without unions, period. We must make people understand that. A great, great many Americans are well aware that the folks running things today do not have their interests in mind, but instead serve the interests of entities that would see workers’ rights ground to powder.

That awareness is out there. We must make them aware that unions offer them the best possible chance to bring change, to turn back this tide, to bring us more fully towards the realization of that idea that is America. In your hands is the power to do these things. In your hands is the future of this great nation.

The word ‘Union’ is synonymous with the word ‘Work.’ I say let us begin this work, let us begin it today, let us not stop, let us not tire. I say let us begin.

Thank you.
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phaseolus Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 12:45 PM
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1. Pitt for President '12!!!
...or at the very least, Pitt for anti-Peggy Noonan forever.

Inspiring. No complaints here...
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Coffee Coyote Donating Member (949 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 12:47 PM
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2. fuck yeah
Aside from a typo or two - which is of almost no import - keep it as is.

I am going to put on some Woody Guthrie now...
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OneBlueSky Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 12:58 PM
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7. nice job, Will . . .
two minor suggestions . . .

in the sentence "First of all, you people don’t need to sit here and listen to someone wax poetic about the greatness of unions," you might want to change "you people" to "you folks," or something similar . . . "you people" always grates, imo . . .

second, in the section where you talk about outsourcing, you might want to mention the fact that the Republican party is outsourcing their fund raising apparatus . . . betcha most union folks don't know that . . . and would be interested to learn . . .

I think this will go over well with your audience . . . be sure to report back on what kind of reception you get . . .

good luck . . . :)
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revcarol Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 09:05 PM
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41. How about 'brothers and sisters" or "union brothers and sisters"
instead of "you people."
More later,have been off-line registering voters(2/3 Democrats)
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ewagner Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 12:51 PM
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3. Good speech Will
can't find anything inaccurate.
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Catshrink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 12:53 PM
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4. WOW!!! I love you.
And as a very new union member, you make me proud to be in a union.

AEA and NEA.
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really-looney Donating Member (330 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 12:56 PM
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5. MTA Member
Will,
Were you an MTA member, if so Labor always likes to be addressed by one of their brothers and sisters.

Great speech should excite the crowd.
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farmbo Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 12:57 PM
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6. One more Bush Bitch-slap to Unions: Iraqi Trade union activists arrested
http://www.iraqwar.ru/iraq-read_article.php?articleId=17445&lang=en

Iraq's legal code may be in disarray. The streets of Baghdad may be filled with thieves and hijackers who seem to have little fear of being arrested. But US occupation authorities seem to have no trouble identifying one crime, at least. For the four million people out of work in Iraq, protest is against the law.

On July 29, US occupation forces in Iraq arrested a leader of Iraq's new emerging labor movement, Kacem Madi, along with 20 other members of the Union of the Unemployed. The unionists had been conducting a sit-in to protest the treatment of unemployed Iraqi workers by the US occupation authority, and the fact that contracts for work rebuilding the country have been given overwhelmingly to US corporations.

<snip>

No WMDs. No Nukes. No Union rights.


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Coffee Coyote Donating Member (949 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 12:59 PM
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8. this speech kills fascists
:-)

Former NEA and NTEU member here. Happy Labor Day to all!
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blondeatlast Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 01:02 PM
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9. Love the "wobblies" reference,
you might want to mention the retracting of "dangerous workplace" legislation by this admin.
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AP Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 01:07 PM
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10. I LOVE the Wobblies reference!
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Ivory_Tower Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 01:07 PM
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11. Good speech, I like it. A couple of nits:
(1) In Paragraph 6 you write: "...we all know George is not running things here." but in Paragraph 7 you write: "...guys like George find themselves able to run the show." It just felt inconsistent to me. Not sure what alternative phrasing I'd use, but it's one of those cases where we can't decide if he's just a puppet or really a player.

(2) "...by the cynical way Bush praises workers out of one side of his mouth while gutting their income out of the other." That felt awkward to me, even though I know you're trying to claim that he talks out of both sides of his mouth. It feels like you mixed up two metaphors (mouths and hands). Maybe something like "...by the cynical way Bush pats workers on the back with one hand and guts their incomes with the other." Or even "by the cynical way Bush pats workers on the back with one hand and stabs them in the back with the other"?

(3) "Caution and deference have no place in this conversation anymore, I think." Dump the "I think" -- it'll sound more forceful, and less deferential. :) Or if you'd prefer, dump the "I think" and start the sentence with "I believe that", especially since you repeat that phrase later on.

I think I caught one typo ("medial" instead of "medical"), but that was about it.

Just my $0.02 -- Good job.
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WilliamPitt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 01:14 PM
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16. Thanks! Fixed. n/t
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kentuck Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 01:09 PM
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12. Here is short article I wrote about unions you might be able to use...
There is a lot of debate these days about what is the best type of government. The consensus seems to be that state governments are better than Federal government and that local governments are better than state governments. City Councils know how to better run their cities than bureaucrats at the state level, and so forth.



After all, city council members are elected by a democratic majority. The same could be said about local school board members. By majority vote, they make decisions for the community or district they represent. By access to the democratic rule, the minority adheres to the wishes of the majority. If the majority says we need to raise taxes to pay for paving the streets, the minority cannot defer from paying taxes simply because they did not agree with the majority.



It could be argued that the most local democratic process of all -- even more local than city councils and school boards -- are the local unions. They have elections no different from those for President, Governor, or City Council Member. The majority agree to a contract and the minority cannot defer from the decisions simply because they do not agree. That would run counter to democratic rule. By Democratic process, the minority cannot opt out paying their dues simply because they do not "believe" in unions.



The "right-to-work" laws are in opposition to our democratic principles of majority rule. It would be no different in substance than saying we will not pay taxes next year because we do not agree with the person that was chosen by the majority to be President of this nation. Or we will not pay 10cents more in state taxes for gasoline because we do not agree with the Governor. Or we will not pay property taxes for school bond because we disagreed with how the majority voted.



It is wrong to argue that the democratic process stops with city councils at the local level and cannot be practiced at any lower level in our society. Local unions are , in reality, the most democratic institutions in our representative democracy. They have a higher percentage of participation in their electoral process than even the Presidential election. They adhere to the principles of the Constitution and the ideal of representative democracy.


On the other hand, the business community is the most undemocratic and autocratic institution in our nation. Our guaranteed rights and freedoms are surrendered at the corporation gate. For the privilege of contributing his labor to the corporation, the worker may be asked to take a lie detector test or to urinate in a cup to proof he is worthy to enter the gate. Illegal in any other place in our society, his phone calls may be monitored without his knowledge. Likewise, his e-mail and inter-office communications. He may be subjected to surveillance by secret cameras and recording devices. Who is really looking out for the interests of the working people of this country?




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goobergunch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 01:12 PM
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13. Great speech!! No objections here.
:toast:
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markses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 01:12 PM
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14. Let America be America Again
Let America Be America Again

By Langston Hughes

Let America be America again.
Let it be the dream it used to be.
Let it be the pioneer on the plain
Seeking a home where he himself is free.

(America never was America to me.)

Let America be the dream the dreamers dreamed--
Let it be that great strong land of love
Where never kings connive nor tyrants scheme
That any man be crushed by one above.

(It never was America to me.)

O, let my land be a land where Liberty
Is crowned with no false patriotic wreath,
But opportunity is real, and life is free,
Equality is in the air we breathe.

(There's never been equality for me,
Nor freedom in this "homeland of the free.")

Say, who are you that mumbles in the dark?
And who are you that draws your veil across the stars?

I am the poor white, fooled and pushed apart,
I am the Negro bearing slavery's scars.
I am the red man driven from the land,
I am the immigrant clutching the hope I seek--
And finding only the same old stupid plan
Of dog eat dog, of mighty crush the weak.

I am the young man, full of strength and hope,
Tangled in that ancient endless chain
Of profit, power, gain, of grab the land!
Of grab the gold! Of grab the ways of satisfying need!
Of work the men! Of take the pay!
Of owning everything for one's own greed!

I am the farmer, bondsman to the soil.
I am the worker sold to the machine.
I am the Negro, servant to you all.
I am the people, humble, hungry, mean--
Hungry yet today despite the dream.
Beaten yet today--O, Pioneers!
I am the man who never got ahead,
The poorest worker bartered through the years.

Yet I'm the one who dreamt our basic dream
In the Old World while still a serf of kings,
Who dreamt a dream so strong, so brave, so true,
That even yet its mighty daring sings
In every brick and stone, in every furrow turned
That's made America the land it has become.
O, I'm the man who sailed those early seas
In search of what I meant to be my home--
For I'm the one who left dark Ireland's shore,
And Poland's plain, and England's grassy lea,
And torn from Black Africa's strand I came
To build a "homeland of the free."

The free?

Who said the free? Not me?
Surely not me? The millions on relief today?
The millions shot down when we strike?
The millions who have nothing for our pay?
For all the dreams we've dreamed
And all the songs we've sung
And all the hopes we've held
And all the flags we've hung,
The millions who have nothing for our pay--
Except the dream that's almost dead today.

O, let America be America again--
The land that never has been yet--
And yet must be--the land where every man is free.
The land that's mine--the poor man's, Indian's, Negro's, ME--
Who made America,
Whose sweat and blood, whose faith and pain,
Whose hand at the foundry, whose plow in the rain,
Must bring back our mighty dream again.

Sure, call me any ugly name you choose--
The steel of freedom does not stain.
From those who live like leeches on the people's lives,
We must take back our land again,
America!

O, yes,
I say it plain,
America never was America to me,
And yet I swear this oath--
America will be!

Out of the rack and ruin of our gangster death,
The rape and rot of graft, and stealth, and lies,
We, the people, must redeem
The land, the mines, the plants, the rivers.
The mountains and the endless plain--
All, all the stretch of these great green states--
And make America again!
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Pavlovs DiOgie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 01:12 PM
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15. Excellent
"Blaming George W. Bush for the problems that his administration has caused is a lot like blaming Mickey Mouse when Disney screws up."

Classic! I can't think of anyway to improve your speech. I wish the teachers' union in Vegas could hear it. They need to remember they are supposed to represent the teachers, not the educrats.
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Eloriel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 01:24 PM
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17. Good
This bothers me:
A union taught me to read. A union taught me to write.

And search for the word "orgy" -- wherever it is, you have a mixed metaphor I found jarring.

Good luck!

Eloriel
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WilliamPitt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 01:54 PM
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18. What bothers you about this?
Edited on Sat Aug-30-03 01:55 PM by WilliamPitt
I went to public schools, and the teachers were union.

P.S. Replaced 'orgy' with 'stampede.'
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Eloriel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 02:26 PM
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23. Well, Will
It wasn't "a union" who taught you to read and write, it was a union MEMBER, and I think you distract people when you use terminology or phrasing that is that far from accurate -- and IMO you don't want to distract people that way.

Maybe your point is something like, "I can read and write thanks to a union." But the union didn't teach you. It's just a literally false way to phrase it, one which doesn't quite reach the level of figure of speech. So it's distracting.

BTW and OT: I particularly wanted you to see this post of mine (opening post, you can read the responses or not): http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=show_topic&forum=104&topic_id=250303

Fine speech. I'm sure it will go over very well.

Eloriel
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WilliamPitt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 02:36 PM
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24. Point taken.
Thanks.
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sandnsea Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 01:55 PM
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19. Awesome!!!
Totally love it! Appreciation and reminder of the past leads perfectly into the present, respects US and world trade and workers, and looks to the future. And slams Bush. Beautiful!

One minor suggestion, 5th paragraph from the bottom "but is now more desperate than it ever has been", might be better as 'but is certainly as desperate as it ever has been'.

Workers have got some serious problems right now, but the mineworkers and farmers and textile workers had problems that literally dealt with their very life. The problems today aren't 'more' desperate, just 'differently' desperate.

Just a thought, nitpicky, but I kind of bristle against hyperbole, even a tiny bit. Of course, you may see it differently than I do and then we're into opinion and your remark would be correct!
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WilliamPitt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 01:56 PM
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20. Thanks! Fixed. n/t
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patdem Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 02:13 PM
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21. Fantastic....rather than the history you delve into the future of unions!
Great speech and I am sure it will be greatly received.

I noted only one thing....the other two nits I did not pick up

on September 11 was union workers all, and those cops and fire fighters and EMTs have since had their funding eviscerated by an administration that took their pictures and then gave them the back of their hand.

back of their hand onr his hand????

Yes, most people talk about how greatful we should be to the unions...what most fail to state is that their undoing will also be the undoing of everything we hold dear today...8 hour workdays, gone...no overtime...why stop at 40 hrs per week???

This is a wonderful speech. Break a leg!
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WilliamPitt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 02:16 PM
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22. Thanks! Fixed. n/t
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Friar Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Sep-01-03 02:44 AM
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54. "...back of it's hand", actually
Hate to be pedantic but an administration is a thing, not a person.
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Wickster Donating Member (261 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 02:44 PM
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25. Here I am, standing and cheering
Excellent, Will. Just a couple of points: I realize that this is a speech and not an editorial so I read it outloud a couple of times. Now I don't know your speech cadence but for mine, I found that saying "people" after saying "First, you" (3rd para.) was a little awkward.

Also, my father fought (and was severely injured) fighting for his union in the 40's. If he were alive today I am sure that he would be ranting about how this administration (by encouraging jobs to go overseas and mass unemployment here at home) is trying to "break the back of the union" -- inflammatory words to any union member.

Oh, and in the first paragraph, did you mean to say "20th century is" or "21st century" is or "20th century was".

Really, really good job, Will. But then you epitomize excellent political commentary. A most magnificent mind you have!
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BritishHuman Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 02:45 PM
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26. A great speech! My one thought...
In this ongoing recession – helped in no small part by a couple of Bush administration tax cuts that were basically multi-billion dollar thank-you notes to the corporations that funded Bush’s 2000 campaign – in this on going recession, many many many American families depend on overtime pay to make ends meet.

That's a hell of a sentence. It might work better as two.

"He seems not to have noticed we're in a recession, caused in no small part by a couple of Bush administration tax cuts that were mostly multi-billion dollar thank-you notes to the corporations that funded Bush’s 2000 campaign. And in this recession, many many American families depend on overtime pay to make ends meet."
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JohnKleeb Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 02:52 PM
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27. That was great
one question when you running for congress :) oh yeah you are in the state with no republican congresspeople or senators. After Minnesota, Massuchetts is a great hotbed of democratic heroes.
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sistersofmercy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 03:03 PM
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28. Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!
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never cry wolf Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 03:58 PM
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31. Great Will
Edited on Sat Aug-30-03 03:58 PM by steviet_2003
I would have liked to see the words "lies" and "bush" in the same sentence so that you could subliminally somehow connect the two, maybe even throw in a WMD or al quaida reference too. but be that as it may, only a suggestion. I am not sure how the following will show up becuase i typed it on word and am pasting. I was not an english major buy my mom was so i had 20 years of grammar school:



• Double “is” before and after commas, 7th para, 4th line:

"The incredible mess this Iraq war is, and is turning into, is nothing more or less than a prime example of what you get when you put the boss’ son in charge of the production lines."

• Maybe after para 10, something on shrub declining a pay raise in order to pay for the war on terrorism, here’s a clip and a link:

"President limits raises for federal worker

Associated Press
Published August 28, 2003

WASHINGTON -- Giving civilian federal workers a pay raise of more than 2 percent next year would jeopardize the war on terrorism, President Bush said Wednesday."

http://www.chicagotribune.com/news/nationworld/chi-0308280382aug28,1,5710736.story

I don’t know if they are talking about union workers.


• Maybe a coupla alterations to this para:

I submit that union men and women have earned the right to speak openly and strongly against the direction this country is headed. They earned that right with the blood and lives of the union men and women who charged headlong into two burning buildings two years ago. Union men and union women doing their jobs. On that dark day, union men and union women spent their lives on that job, and they did it without a second thought or a hesitating step. Union men and women earned the right to speak their minds after their fallen brothers and sisters were used by the Bush administration as props in a photo-op, and then were shamefully slapped across the face by that same administration.


• Maybe the 2nd para after mussolini’s quote, do eisenhower’s quote warning of the military-industrial complex I his farewell address:

"In the councils of government, we must guard against the acquisition of unwarranted influence, whether sought or unsought, by the military-industrial complex." Farewell Address. Radio and TV January 17. 1961"

on edit: spelin
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Generic Other Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 03:51 PM
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29. Pay Me My Money Down!
Drum roll. Hats off. Salute.

Reminds me of an old folksong "Pay Me My Money Down."

"I wish I was the boss's son
sit on the bank and watch the work done..."

Best Labor Day Speech I've heard yet! Just the right touch reminding us of the chimp watching the place burn.
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LWolf Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 03:54 PM
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30. It's great the way it is.
I'm late to the post, so you've already cleaned it up. Let us know how it goes!
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HereSince1628 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 05:04 PM
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32. Looks fine to me...
The problem I run into when I talk to public groups (ecology and epidemiology) is that I tend to think and talk in paragraphs (complete with topic sentence, evidence, non-evidence, transition) and make excellent word choices that unfortunately are not part of most peoples' everyday speech.

So, I went in looking for long-thoughts and erudite word choices that might be hard for people to follow. You've done a good job of avoiding that sort of problem.


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Kenneth ken Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 06:17 PM
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33. my critique
For what it’s worth:

Some will argue that George W. Bush is a great leader. I would argue that he is a symbol, in more ways than one. As a leader he is literally symbolic, a figurehead –– I mean, come on, folks, we all know George is not running things here. Blaming George W. Bush for the problems that his administration has caused is a lot like blaming Mickey Mouse when Disney screws up. I submit that if you go blaming George for our problems, you are barking up a wrong, very hollow tree.
I think this whole paragraph is kind of weak; it sort of needs to be there to connect the preceding and subsequent, but it also seems to veer off-topic. I think going from ...a symbol in more ways than one. to symbols are important. would be better.

...policy to cut overtime pay for our soldiers still under fire in Iraq? Isn’t this actually cutting hazardous duty pay? I don’t know that soldiers actually get overtime. If I am correct, it might be useful to say something like, ...to cut hazardous duty ay, which is equivalent to overtime... - yech - my example is worse - maybe I’m off base, or maybe you have better words.

apart from that; you bring tears to my eyes.
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Upfront Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 06:53 PM
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35. Sounds Good
but somehow you need to flat out plain talk about how inportant it is to vote in the democrats. Except, they hear that every time someone speaks to them. lol Darn good speach. Never mind my concern, they get it.
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NNN0LHI Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 06:39 PM
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34. Speaking as a proud 30+ year(s) member of the United Auto Workers...
...I could not improve on this speech.

Don

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grasswire Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 08:16 PM
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38. another nit-picking proofreader here....
The phrases "first of all" and "second of all" are consistently cut to read "first" and "second" -- the "of all" additions make your message less forceful and direct.
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stickdog Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-31-03 12:20 AM
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48. If you are going to pick nits, then "I submit" can be struck as well
except for perhaps the first time it's used.
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diamondsoul Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 07:12 PM
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36. It seems someone else pointed this out
already, but the plain truth is that soldiers don't get overtime pay. The last time I figured it out, the average enlisted man made $6.10 an hour. That was about 6 years ago, and now they're cutting every benefit soldiers and their families rely on, including the family housing funds and hazardous duty pay.

It's a good point, but I'm finicky about the general population being misled about military pay and benefits. Too many seem to think military life is cushy because of the "great benefits". Trust me, it isn't cushy by a long stretch!
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dudeness Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 07:19 PM
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37. bravo will
union.n 1.uniting..being united...2.a whole formed by uniting parts..an association formed by the united of people or groups...oxford english dictionary..

I thought your remarks about our fallen comrades in NYC particularily poignant..well done
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grasswire Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 08:27 PM
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39. one more
Would replacing the word "eviscerated" with "gutted" be more in keeping with the hard talk thing you've got going here?
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Paragon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 08:43 PM
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40. "Talk hard!"
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lapislzi Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 10:16 PM
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42. Fate of unions under Mussolini?
You bring him up...but how did unions fare under fascism? I'm ashamed to say I don't know, but if Il Duce ripped them apart, this might help make your point. Look at unions in Europe now. They are to be envied.

The spectre of the F-word is powerful. Use it to its full advantage.

Good work, kiddo.
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WilliamPitt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 10:31 PM
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43. Il Duce made sport of the trade unions
Tore them to pieces.
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lapislzi Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 10:34 PM
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44. Well, that's your point,.
Make sure THEY know it.
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Kbowe Donating Member (272 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 10:39 PM
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45. Great Will. Just one problem spot for me...
You say that George is not running the show in the opening paragraphs and then in paragraph 6 or 7 you say "...guys like George find themselves able to run the show." Somehow that just didn't hang right to me. How about something like: "...guys like George are placed into positions to be used to ..."

Otherwise...you are great as usual.
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stickdog Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 10:55 PM
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46. Nice job, Will.
I would also mention that even government jobs, even Repuke fund raising jobs are being putsourced to foreign, non-union shops.

I would also mention that Americans who earn a fair living wage are the backbone of the country and its economy and that "borrow and spend" cheap labor Republicans are pushing us away from the American Dream and into an Argentinian nightmare.
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GalleryGod Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-31-03 12:24 AM
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50. Go make speeches that will "Raise buildings!"
Good Luck-GoodWill- in your Hunting!
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Crewleader Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-30-03 11:54 PM
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47. Heartfelt... William
Edited on Sat Aug-30-03 11:55 PM by Crewleader
....your words will touch their souls when you give your fine speech this Labor Day at the Union Hall.

Everyone on this Labor Day take time out to remember what working people do for this country, over this past year and since Bush has been in office. A struggle it's been,over 3 million jobs loss,workers'rights in safety and hazardious injuries at the work place is up and to kill overtime for non union workers.

If you truly want to honor working people, do so at the ballot box in November, and vote for candidates who will advocate for working families , the ones who really care so our Labor Laws are enforced to protect the working men and women of this country.



Have a Good Labor Day
Peace and Prosperity Brothers & Sisters!
:hi:
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Khephra Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-31-03 12:24 AM
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49. Looks goood to me!
:toast:
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nostamj Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-31-03 04:20 PM
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51. late to this and
seems that the nits are pretty well picked.

so, I'll just give it a :kick: for those who will not be there to hear it in person!
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linazelle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-31-03 04:33 PM
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52. A work of art....
I learned from it, and I'm sure your audience will as well. This is very inspiring. I'm sure you will save it to be published later with the many, many great speeches you have yet to write. You're bound for greatness.
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Friar Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Sep-01-03 02:34 AM
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53. F**kin' awesome
One of the best things I've ever read. And worth a kick.
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