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RSherman

(576 posts)
Fri Sep 8, 2023, 09:26 PM Sep 2023

Heat Lightning

All day, meteorologists promised extreme storms.
Tonight, the atmosphere is grumbling,
clearing its throat, and posturing,
like a featherweight boxer
feinting,
trying to seem larger and tougher
than he is.

The sky tries to intimidate
but the little flashes of heat lightning
are only entertaining.

I sit on the porch and think
this is my favorite kind of night.

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Heat Lightning (Original Post) RSherman Sep 2023 OP
this one loves a good thunderstorm. rumble bumble and the gnomes are bowling in heaven. AllaN01Bear Sep 2023 #1
Sounds woke to me. CrispyQ Sep 2023 #2
I think it's a lovely poem cyclonefence Sep 2023 #3
Kind of having that... 2naSalit Sep 2023 #4

cyclonefence

(4,483 posts)
3. I think it's a lovely poem
Fri Sep 8, 2023, 10:13 PM
Sep 2023

but the editor in me can't help suggesting "the weatherman" for "meteorologists" in the first line. I like the idea of the sky trying to intimidate with growling, threatening noises and with heat lightning--it's a lovely image. And then you, in the face of all the attempts to scare you, sitting on your front porch loving it.

Reminds me a little of "Please don't throw me in the briar patch!"

2naSalit

(86,646 posts)
4. Kind of having that...
Sat Sep 9, 2023, 12:11 AM
Sep 2023

Going on right now except we're actually going to get the rain, soon.

I took some pictures of some really cool clouds this evening along with a marvelous sunset in the west. I need to download them, maybe in the morning, I'm starting to fade right now.


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